Villainess no Yume

Self-Published

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Description

Ryuu-jin Aoki, one of the top 10 powerful people in the world, found that his favorite character in the novel named Yume suddenly became a villainess.

For this reason, he used his wealth to find the whereabouts of the author. But to no avail, he failed.

One day, the newest chapter of the novel, condemned Yume, who was punished into slavery.

This is where Ryuu-jin's patience got broken.

Luckily, a miracle happened where he was given a choice to live in her world and save her.

So he became Ryu Xanastre, a self-made male lead who will save the damsel in distress.

"Wait for me my princess," he said, "if the male lead abandons you, then I'll be the second male lead and protect you."

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: KonpekiSensei

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 89
Views: 46,625

Chapters(40 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

MeminaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What an amazing part in this story, is when the MC(Ryuu-jin) chooses to give up everything he had, even though his life in the human world was already better (as a rich man) but then, as he became possessed in the storyline of Yume, he has begun to love her without any condition, that's why he is willing to give up everything and follow her in the other world called Azure. The author of the book that he was reading before, gave him an option to be part of that story and re-write the destiny of Yume from hardship and tragedy in the hands of an evil prince. I want to see the beautiful outcome of this story until the end. It’s a promising novel that must be read.
This novel is really good! I am looking forward to more chapters, and its progress as it builds up the MC to be stronger than any other. The plot of the story and its transition is good. From the human world to the world of Azure. I love this story because it turns out for us human as a being with different desires; maybe it is a passion towards to a set of skill so that we can use it to develop ourselves, in that phase, we will decide what path are we gonna choose? It's either for our own good? Or use it to help other people. Also, it shows the reality, what's within the human hearts. To be dependent and isolate or live alone or be a dependable person that can help other people to improve and succeed in life too.
SilverVoidRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I rate this highly because the first chapters are just so good. It does a good job setting up what the protagonist wants, and what he will do to get what he wants. Though considering what happened afterwards, I had to not praise it too much.
I personally don't want to complain on style and grammar, but it's not like it doesn't have its (potential) issues. Some stuttering can feel like a lot, and as of chapter 22, the author did use the prolonging of syllables for portraying some emotions. It's something I can get through, but I'm not sure about others.
The story was going at a smooth pace, and then, it sped up. The time skip(s) made it difficult for me to feel good about the characters' experience with their feelings, and to get to their motivations.
Some chapters are written by showing what happened after first, and then rewinding back to how it happened. Perhaps it got a bit overdone. It's fine, but it's not as appealing as I initially hoped it would be.
Summary
Style and grammar - I'm okay with it.
Story and character - the sequencing of events, or pacing, can make it difficult to fully enjoy these elements. Overall though, it's a nice read.
librarysmilesRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This is a story about how Ryu, a perpetual young man, wants to have a "happily ever after" with Yume, a young lady.
The challenges:
1) Himself - This is the biggest challenge Ryu faces. Ryu refuses to tell Yume that he likes her.
2) Yume is a fiancée to a crown prince (who is cheating).
This is a story about what happens when you give hormonal teenagers power.
TheLastScavengerRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This is a good story. Yes, despite my rating I say this is a good story. I docked half a star because of grammar issues that can be rectified with time. Those don't make me annoyed in any way, because my internal auto-correct was able to handle it just fine.
I docked another half a star because the characters... Well, the way they're written feels... Worn out? I've read literally dozens of stories with characters that act similarly to the characters in this story. Does that make them bad? Not at all. However, it does make me less inclined to care about them.
Finally, I docked another half a star because... Well, everything seems to be handed to the MC. I understand perfectly well that he's meant to be powerful. However, it's written in the fashion of "weak to strong," instead of "Strong Lead." This means we see rapid growth that feels forced instead of natural. Some like their stories written that way. More power to 'em. I'm not one of those. If it feels like forced growth, it just feels off.
All in all, not a bad story. If you can handle some grammar issues and a menagerie of tropes, there's a seriously good story here.