Very Very First Draft: Endless Dive

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Description

He had been preparing for years. Finally, the time that he had invested paid off. His game studio had broke even and even started profiting. Quietly handing over his duties, after a few months he was finally free. The same day Azaan freed himself from his family business an entity that had been observing the planet for decades started unfolding its plan.

Azaan finds himself thrown from one prison to another, even if he prefers this one. The world quietly starts changing as people slowly start gaining supernatural powers. Some use them for good, some for evil and some for pure profit.

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This story will mostly be a slow burn, though I am considering including bits of time skips to reduce the repetitive stuff while also keeping up the pace.

Synopsis will undergo if it can be bettered.

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Tags and content warnings are mainly to give me creative freedom later on. This is my first novel ever, and English isn’t my native language, so please spare me, my lord/ladies. Any feedback is more than welcome with a bucketful of thanks.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: ElderDragon

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
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bambasticRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's a promising start. The story is about a man who until recently was unable to leave his family home and be independent for reasons and then when he is free BAM! Dungeon @#$%!. The story is engaging but could use a once over.
I quiet liked it thought it could use some polish and alot of of polish in some other places. It would help if it was read a couple of times to get the most obvious sentence and grammer mistakes taken out but this is the authours first story so some kinks will have to be worked out as it is being written. The chapters do get better writing wise as they go on but the story had me from the start as you don't see any stories from that part of the world (none that I have come across anyway). I was engaged in the story form the start and it doesn't get repetitive. The protagonist has his faults and tries to compensate for them. He is not some kind of super guy that picks up things as he goes. It takes him time to get the hang of things and he does make some mistakes but tries to learn from them.