(VERY OLD)

Information

Status

Cancelled

Year

2016

Author

Derthian

• Chapter 3 : Encounter
  Jun 28, 2016
• Chapter 2 : The Dark Maze
  Jun 18, 2016
• Chapter 1 : Condemned
  Jun 16, 2016
• Part 1 : Purgatory
  Jun 16, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• NIDHOGGRRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  They say you don't know what you're missing until it's gone...
  ... It's true. (I don't know What to do, I really want Book 2, I'm just a stupid fool who fell for his April Fools Thing)
  One of the Best Stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
• SamsaraRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  An amazing story, it'll hook you and draw you deeper and deeper into its great plot until you reach the latest chapter and realize the next chapter isn't out yet causing you to fall into the depths of depression. :P
• BlakeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  the charters are interesting and it doesn't get boring grammars not bad
• DevilCriezRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The story thus far has been very well done and very enjoyable. The main character with mystery behind what happened and what her goal is leaves me wanting to know more. This also includes how poeple react to who she could become. I have read up to chapter 18. I can't wait to read more and i think this story has the ability to become an excellent and very interesting story.
• MistiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Extremely enjoyable, effectively tells 2 stories at once and everything is relatively well written.
  A missing star for a few minor errors, a lack of creative onomatopoeia (One of my pet peeves, authors writing *sigh* or *giggle*, the sfx are much nicer to read.) And awkard olde English. I'm no expert on Shakespeare but a lot of it was rather jarring to read. Fits the character though.
  There should be some more character development but I expect that it will come later, I'm looking forward to it.
  Oh and no fucking stupid pov changes like sudden lines in bold and italic going SO AND SO'S FIRST PERSON POV or IT'S NOW THIRD PERSON OF SO AND SO. God that annoys me on so many levels. A good book shouldn't need that, the within should tell you. It's just plain last. So thank you author for not having them
• LazytophatRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The start was really well done and keep me wondering what the next part was going to entail it has good chapter length and after reading chapter 9 I am looking forward to the next part to see what happens. My only issue would be the sporadic release time since it seems to be everyone week/month? no constant release schedule, I would like to know when to expect the next chapter. Other than that I think that this has great potential and look forward to reading more.
• SedactiveRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  From the description its about someone who will reincarnate but with no memories which basically applies to every being in existance if we assume souls exist.
  So it kinda defeats the purpose of calling it reincarnation and irks me quite a bit.Would have preferd it if the description said a person from an old forgotten bloodline still chained to their oaths while not being aware of it ect would make more sense.