Vampire the Masquerade: Nirvana

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Fiona_Singer

• 19 Lalaland Sponsorship
  Jul 30, 2019
• 18 Case Study
  Jul 30, 2019
• 17 Private Investigation
  Jul 30, 2019
• 16 The Night is Still Young
  Jul 30, 2019
• 15 Welcome Aboard
  Jul 30, 2019
• 14 Session in South Kensington, London, 1708
  Jul 30, 2019
• 13 Reunion
  Jul 30, 2019
• 12 An der Schönen Roten Donau
  Jul 30, 2019
• 11 In the Mind of Madness
  Jul 30, 2019
• 10 Father of All Fathers
  Jul 30, 2019
• 09 The First Murderer
  Jul 30, 2019
• 08 Sucker For Pain
  Jul 30, 2019
• 07 Evening Business
  Jul 30, 2019
• 06 No Rest For the Wicked
  Jul 30, 2019
• 05 Trial
  Jul 30, 2019
• 04 Embrace
  Jul 30, 2019
• 03 Last Sunrise
  Jul 30, 2019
• 02 Bare Thy Teeth
  Jul 30, 2019
• 01 Christmas Eve
  Jul 30, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(5)

• ArchmageNaokiRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Story is perfect 100% with no downside, no need for improvements at all. Sara, now go back to writing.
• MeloncholyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It has a few phrases here and there that feel awkward to me, but overall, its good. Not my cup of tea, but definitely an amazing read for its genre.
• NoxAllericRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I never knew much about the Vampire:the Masquerade series, except that it was well received by many. Yet this fanfiction kept me captivated, despite knowing little to nothing about the lore or the series in general. Safe to say, it’s very approachable for newcomers like me, and a real treat for the fans of the series. But enough sweet talk on my part, let’s get to the details.
  Style Score:
  Fiona writing style brimmed with captivating descriptions of settings and atmosphere, there’s always a sense of place and mood in every chapter she wrote. Each line flowed smooth like blood dripping from a pale cold neck, so I don’t myself needing to stop and do a double take as often as many other writings on this website. Actions scene was well put together in a sense that it’s not completely impossible to follow and it’s not dull like piece of wet cardboard, it was at the right balance where it won’t overwhelm the reader or make them feel bored.
  Grammar Score:
  Grammar seems to be top tier in this website, though it doesn’t really take much to reach that level if i’m being honest. Good job on using punctuation properly.
  Story Score:
  In this story, we followed a girl with somewhat of a tragic past, haunted by guilt and hollowed by grief. I have a soft spot for mc that started with little to nothing, it’s enjoyable to root for them in their struggle and watch them grow into something greater. I could tell that Fiona took the extra time to explain the world and the lore of the story as she mentioned that her work was intended for readers that don’t know the story, for me to do something like that requires passion and zeal that only the few have. Another thing I could praise fiona for was the ability to create and maintain action, never a dull momet while reading this.
  Character Score:
  I’ve enjoyed the characters in this story, they have personalities, traits, goals, quirks, everything a character needed to become memorable. I loved how each of them have different speech pattern, mo
• The Lone DefinitionRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A Sandwich who never reads Vampire novels does now.
• burdi99Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  i have been read all the chapter up to 29, it is good story, the grammar is good (i am not english speaker so i don't know) but it is easy to read
  the story is about a girl who haunted by her past unable to move on, until she met a certain man that bring her to underworld
  it is nice story give it a try