Unveiling eternity chronicles of the unsummoned

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Description

"In a world where friendships were shattered, and alliances crumbled, one man found himself on the precipice of darkness. Follow Hiroshi's harrowing journey as he traverses the ruins of a once-vibrant city, his heart consumed by the flames of change and the quest for ultimate power. 'Unveiling eternity' is a gripping tale of betrayal, redemption, and the relentless pursuit of a singular goal that could either save or damn everything he holds dear."

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
wingman

Tags

ACTIONADVENTUREROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFEWAR AND MILITARYGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDSOFT SCI-FISTRATEGYARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCEHARD SCI-FI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
2,120

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Silverstorm4444Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Unsummoned is a pretty new fiction with some promise. The author is new and still figuring out their style, but the story itself is compelling and the characters show a lot of potential for new growth.
    Grammar: Perfect. I definitely didn't see anything.
    Characters: Pretty good, but still being developed. You have two people striving for perfection above all else and it's slowly destroying everything they care about. This review does come right after what I assume to be the inciting incident, so I don't know how they grow, but the set up is there for it
    Style: Here's where things get rough. This story was helped by ChatGPT and you can definitely tell by some of the ways things are worded. ChatGPT struggles to not try and permanently end a segment it generates so you'll have very final sounding transitions throughout the whole piece. It will also cycle through the same ideas a couple of times before finally settling on a concluding note. That said, I'm sure this will improve as the author develops their style more and gets comfortable with writing.
    Story: Actually pretty good. I'm too early in to tell where it's going completely. but the bit world changing incident just happened and it looks like the MC's perfect life is about to be flipped on its head. Good stuff.
    Overall, this is worth a read. Especially as the author improves and develops their style more.