Unkillable Loser

Self-Published

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Description

Unkillable Loser Summary

It’s actually happening! I’ve actually been transported to a different world!

My inner nerd is about to have a heart attack from the excitement.

They’ll tell me what kind of abilities I have soon. I absolutely can’t wait!

Tony Kiru:

LVL: 1 HP: 1000/1000 Mana: 0.5/0.5

Strength: 1

Stamina: 1

Speed: 1

Intelligence: 7

Dexterity: 0.8

Vitality: Yes

Luck: 13

Special Attributes

[Stunted] [Regeneration] [Loser]

…….

Excuse me but, what the fuck?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Baka Masuta

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 26,852

Chapters(30 total)

Reviews

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Community Reviews(3)

DBoyBluesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far we've had around 3 pov, so warning there if you dislike that sort of thing (I don't care unless it kills the story consistency or pace. Which this one hasn't done except for a Bobby pov exposition dump that we needed for long term story growth... so yeah, good job so far author). Good characterization and my big gripe.
The first chapter (the introduction, the one first listed not the "first chapter") was awful for spoiling, heavy long term foreshadowing that's like months away, and lastly it could be removed and lose nothing. It showed the character we can refer to as mc in a unstable mindset as author has them saying they are crazy. It doesn't add anything, it worsens the character growth, and it feels ultimately pointless.
TosangRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Novel starts white well . It give us the Basic Understanding of mc and his "friends"s characters .
Mc is Calm and Do likeable. I dont see him useing his wis but i hope he will fine in that part.
Others are well done .No stupid or out of place behaviours.
Not much world explore for now.
The Status part is simple enough, not to much attributes or Skill,title etc...
For the story, that what hook me . It lures you with laughs and Smiles
....then....well , let deduct from chap 1 yourself ,Smart Reader of Mine🕵
I cannot really comment about the grammar since im not good with that. But the sentences do easy to read.
A Drawback maybe the Release speed.
All in All , it was good to read ,to wait and to expect for. I hope this Wacky Review of Mine will help. TFTNovel😇
JayaxRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
While the overall idea is ok I kinda have two primary problems that make me give a low review:
1. All the characters seem kind of ok woth anything that hits them. Like that would be fine but imo the main characters goes theough like hell and does not blame anyone nor seem particularly angry about anything. He also seems in my view to not even question why all this happened lich either. It kinda seems its the same woth most characters just being relativly medium on anything. Also people of the world seem to be a monolith with everyone being fine with the torture and deprivation of rights. It just seems we are watching blank people move about.
2. The world buildibg is kinda bad. Things are relativly not thought out and imma just give one example of how things arnt really elborated on and dont make sense. They take the Main characters blood to use for the soldiers. But that technology is mostly beyond the middle ages and without futher eloborsting on what they are using the blood for I am left co fused on what technology level we are since its claimed to be medival.
I dont often give reviews and instead just stop reading but I kinda wanted to like this so decided too. Sorry for any spelling/grammer mistakes