(Un)Paralleled

Self-Published

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Description

Based on the novel byMGHT,Unparalleled.

Things are not as they were. In this alternate story, follow our Hero(?) as he traverses the world.

But, is this world really the one we know?

I will be using MGHT's original story as a guideline, and applying my own touch to it. Due to there being a lack of information on the wider scope of things, I'll be throwing in things that may not adhere to the original author's plans. Then again, what fun is there in reading something that has already been done?

Tags and genres stated are subject to change without notice, be it the addition or removal of tags.

Cover art is a fanart I found online a long time ago. Character is Gyuki from Nurarihyon No Mago.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Tarry

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 135
Views: 61,205

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

HaroonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love this
I've read the previous version and totally loved it and the new one I'm sure will turn out to be just as good if not better.
The only problem I have with this is that at the moment its a bit fast and not too in depth.
Really looking forward to future chapters and thanks to the author for picking up this abandoned jem.
catalinnrRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Before you see my ratings and scroll past my review, hear me out.
As a reader of the original, i can assure you of a few things:
-while keeping similar elements, the story is visibly going in a different direction
-i consider this a draft, like i considered the original (till chapter 24 or so), because to be honest, outside of interesting characters and concept, the grammar and characters suffered. All this story needs is an editor to remove the awkward interactions and repetitive wording as well as inconsistencies caused by merging the plot of the original with this one (names coming from nowhere, endings to actions with no start etc).
-the characters seems a little shallow to be honest, again mostly because of the wording
-author puts more focus on the use of mana and knowledge of the MC from the start, this is one of the few plot holes the original had and i'm glad it was addressed
- more backstory and workings of mana than the original
- less to no romance so far
The overall score for this should be a 5/5 when all mistakes are removed.
As of ch 18, my ratings are kind of low but mainly because it's clearly a draft, so let's not fool ourselves into ignoring the bad writting but still appreciate the effort gone into it.
Give this story a chance and keep it up Tarry, trending or not, you have a fanbase.