Two Times Perfect?

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Description

Thomas Freeman -- a simple child born into a world of swords and sorcery.  Common looks.  Common wealth.  Of common status.  A common enough existence.  At least until he started remembering a past life as Thomas Faraday.

Thomas Faraday -- a modern child, born in the modern era.  Or was he?  Maybe he's just a dream of Tomas's that never really existed.  It's not like his previous knowledge actually was any help in his current life.

Or is it?

Read it and find out for yourself.

Two Times Perfect --The tale of one man trying to reconcile the memories of two lifetimes into one memorable existence.

Rated: M[18+] Contains (or will contain in the future) sex, nudity, rape, violence, gore, and lots of goodly evilness and evilish goodness!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Darkbringer

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
261
Views
56,830

Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • SunroseRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The characters are developing well, and each has a distint personality.  The plot is coming along well, and I do like that the author is skipping some of the stuff with some of what happened coming out without actually disruppting the story line.
  • NasorrenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is very well paced . The character and world development is good.
  • BeyogiRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    To summarize this story, it's a wish-fullfillment reincarnation harem story. Which is both its appeal and its Achilles heel.
    The MC starts out as a peasant child in a magical world with no magical talent. He's living in some village in bum-fuck nowhere and his reincarnation memories are only good for making his life difficult and him unhappy with his lot. Instead of becoming a lumberjack like his father he's decided to go off adventuring as a hunter.
    That's where the real story starts and he starts aquiring the harem. The problem is that's also where the inconsistencies start. His Harem girls are supposedly extremely talented mages, yet they got caught by some bandits and used as sex slaves. That's not how real slavers operate. That's how it works in porn maybe.
    Then of course the rescued merchant princess swears her life and body to the MC and the story proceeds. Somehow in poor bum ass village he just aquires stylish leather clothing for her. Not mentioning cost at once.
    There's a convient super powerful magical village healer around. Who happens to be the high priest of the god(des) of life.
    Then there's some adventuring, family drama and loads of sex. Then they go off to magic academy and aquire two more Harem girls. Magic Highschool hijinks ensure and magic (slave) bond hijinks ensue.
    The world building includes loads of interesting gems, such as the freely available body modifying, the widely spread slavery, the weird social system, the parents and village of the MC. But all of that isn't really explored and largely just serves as background for harem action.
    Overall the whole reincarnation thing seems to largely just serve as a force multiplier for the whole harem fantasy thing. As it is there's been loads of potential wasted here.
    Especially since the characters are quite interesting and distinct. The MC like most Harem protagonists is the flattest of them all, but he still has understandable reasons for his actions. The reincarnation part actually serves we
  • SrodekRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I liked how it started, but later the author added too many strange events, also too much of a fulfillment trip. But if someone likes happy stories with sexual elements, it's not a bad one.
    I read to chapter 12, in which I dropped the story