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Description

The story is about a world where people have been given special skills based on their lives. Suddenly, monsters start coming to Earth, and everyone's main goal becomes just surviving. The monsters are real, but the real danger comes from humans turning against each other.

We follow a guy who just wants to make sure his family stays safe in this chaotic world where people are fighting each other more than the monsters. It's a story about how far someone will go to protect their loved ones and how tough it is to stay human when the world feels like it's falling apart.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Unchosen_One

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Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 5,724

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FieryGalladeRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This is, to put it bluntly, quite mediocre. The AI-assisted tag feels very appropriate. My guess is that the AI did most of the work, at least in terms of grammar.
Style;
It started off strong. A bit flowery, but manageable. Very short chapters. Then the grammar fell apart and it all started making less and less sense.
Story;
Quite a generic idea. Real life one day leaves the "tutorial", everyone receives gamer-like skills and monsters start appearing. The government seemingly falls apart for no reason(people start becoming murderers with no consequences from the authorities, even before a monster even appears).
Grammar;
Was pretty good for a while(AI use, I assume). Then, it fell apart in the last 2 chapters.
Character;
Mediocre, as of now. The events of the latest chapters are meant to be shocking and stuff, but the story progressed so fast that I had no time to get to know the characters.
The fact that the closest thing we've had to real dialogue was the MCs mother making fun of him in chapter 1 doesn't help.
All in all, the story started off okay(still not great though), but the last chapters really were a thorough disappointment. Not because of the fragmented grammar, but the missing emotional weight the author tried to leverage.