True Faith

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Description

Gods are real, legends exist, and myths roam the wilds and walk the streets. Each and every one has at least one thing in common, that being belief and faith to even exist. All of them adapt to both the era's and types of belief poured into them by the masses. A critical mass of belief had been reached and rather than simply existing, each of these beings began to exert influence over territories of which they have claimed, which led to many crusades in the names of deity's and myth's alike. The crusades have long since come and gone, yet conflicts still arise, and these beings have long since decided that fighting themselves removes the fun out of these conflicts, so they decided to use others. From humans to animals, nothing was off limits to be a representative. But accidents can happen, and no matter how flawless these being of faith claim to be, they aren't, and when mistakes are made, a price must be paid. For one unlucky person, that price comes at his peaceful everyday life....

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Prilisious

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 6,873

Chapters(31 total)

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★★★★ 3.5
Keep up the good work, and keep on writing. For a story off the cuff is going well and has an interesting world being built. Cannot wait for you to make more.
For style, it is written in first person, just as a warning or joy to all people out there. No changing of tenses so far and always been kept within it. Just not my personal preference, but keep up the good work and don't change it
For the story, the interesting world has been built with its own rules and can see how it will expand later to other parts. Interesting to see the different aspects of each being interacting with themselves or each other.
The grammar I believe has some simple spelling mistakes within it, but nothing too major and was able to understand the story clearly.
Characters so far are interesting, with the main character has been given quite a tight spot and dealing with it as usual. Allowing him to make decisions without explaining his temperament but allowing them to be shown. This is also given with the other characters around them as well.
The explanations of the world given are greatly done, not feeling to oppressing but allowing the reader to scroll by them.
All in all a good story and cannot wait for you to continue it :)