Toward Demarcus.

Self-Published

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Description

Highly Inspired by Tbate, Lotm and Jobless Reincarnation amongst others.

Expect rich world building like Lotm, character developments like Jobless Reincarnation and Hype moments similar to Tbate.

The past memories that were like shackles bounding me was one lifted up when I found myself somewhere different. A place which was so different from the earth that I had come to call home. It was a place where anything was possible. Starting with traveling between spaces to controlling an entire nation's political power heads.

It was a place that gave me hope. Hope about a life that I could live, forgotten and throwing all the burdens of the past. And become someone different.

The Story follows the journey of a young man by the name of Zareth. Woken from a nightmare, he finds himself in a completely different world than compared to earth that he came to know, maybe even detest. As he learns more and more about this new world, it's power structures, political intrigues, and further how everything connected with each other, he finds himself slowly getting attached to that world.

But peace are not meant to last long as calamity strikes once again. And this time, he decides to give it his all. For this place was his home now...

You may like this fiction, if:

-Worldbuilding-cultures, traditions and political structures.

-Slightly Slow but interesting developments.

-Delving into magic systems and how they interact with each other.

-Character Developments-both positive and negative.

-Descriptive and witty fight scenes

-First person perspective with multiple Pov's

-Hell lot of Mysteries

Updates at least once every Sunday.

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Raj Ch, AuthorRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This appears to be a new work, so the quality of it may change if the author fumbles. However, if the opening chapters are any indication of the further quality, then I'll say it's good—quite good, in fact. The story is quite detailed and intricate, revolving around characters with unique abilities and their interactions within a mysterious forest. The main character's confusion about the world and their gradual understanding of it feel very natural. Though the information can be somewhat overwhelming, it still maintains a tight grip on the narrative.
    The author's writing style in this story is highly descriptive, managing to strike a delicate balance that maintains the flow of the narrative. I did not come across any noticeable grammatical errors; however, I did notice a minor misspelling of the word "which" on the main page. Since this is a small issue, I would still give the grammar a score of five out of five.
    The characters felt distinctive, which is a positive aspect. The dialogue between them serves a purpose and effectively propels the plot forward. The strategic discussions also highlight varying opinions on the mission's course of action, a detail that I particularly enjoyed.
    Overall, this is an engaging story with detailed world-building, a sense of mystery, and well-executed action sequences.