Titan War : Monster Overlord

Self-Published

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Description

Yohan was an office worker, with a good salary and a nice family.

But everything changes when he is suddenly transported to another world, another realm, another universe, another reality!

And to make it even weirder, he is actually just a copy!

His real self is still living happily with his family as if nothing happened.

Without any risk and being tempted by the prize of the ultimate three wishes at the end, What will Yohan do?

Can he even find enough drive to even the prize? or maybe he will perish and get nothing?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Carpet Rider

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
Followers: 16
Views: 6,871

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Community Reviews(2)

A. StargazerRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I was told to be completely honest with this review. This story needs quite a bit of technical work. The most significant thing holding it back is its execution. While I encourage the author to keep writing, as it's a fantastic hobby, I do think that they need to refresh themselves on basic grammar conventions and work on their style. The poor grammar and the choppy style of the first person narrative made it difficult for me to enjoy the story.
As far as the story goes, it appears to be some sort of tournament with a system, quests, and challenges for the MC and his fellow competitors to overcome. While the MC's motivation for participating is simply the promised reward, the purpose and reason for the test aren't very clear to me.
This story does have plenty of action, with the MC fighting for his life from day one. The conflict is introduced by the system itself as it pits the contestants against each other for the sake of survival and the promise of a far off reward. The system doesn't seem to be interested in allowing diplomatic solutions, and I'm pretty sure all solutions will be violent in nature. So if you like action, this story may appeal to you.
MilcRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story follows Yohan who is duplicated and his clone is dispatched to a combat arena governed by a system. An unusual form of isekai. He is transformed into a lion to begin with and then starts climbing the ranks, earning new abilities and strength as he goes.
The story is fun and engaging but the language barrier unfortunately throws a lot of immersion breaking problems in the way of really getting stuck into the story.
if you want a combat beastkin yarn and aren’t thrown out of the flow by grammar issues you’ll enjoy this I think.
Hats off to the author for having a stab at writing the story they want to read. There is potential here and I wish them all the best on their journey as a scribbler :)