The Worst Was Approved!?

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Description

At a very prestigious school a man just barely manages to get in and is considered the worst of the worst. To make matters even more unbearable, he accidentally trips and throws a bottle of water on to the school's idol.It is a known fact that the school idol's father was a very strict man, and that if the school idol wanted to date anyone she would have to bring him home for her father to judge, if he was judged as inadequate, they would disappear. The girl brings the guy back to her house to get rid of him.WILL CONTAIN 18+ CONTENT(However, you may choose to skip any 18+ chapters, as it will not affect the story too much.)YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: RagedEclipse

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 472
Views: 295,797

Chapters(47 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

D33B0Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is like a breath of fresh air, great humor, fun characters, as well as a nice flow. If you want to relax, have a nice laugh and simply enjoy the interaction of fun characters, than this is a story for you.
Enjoy
Nimble LlamaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love it. its an adorable little story that creates a nice warm atmosphere whilst reading it.
There's great humor, puppy love and character development and moves at comfortable pace.
Definitely worth giving a try at the least.
SudarFanboyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Rom Com is very uncommon in RL
But you are the pioneer from now on
Tue Story is great , you got me hooked from the beginning
All i see is great potential for this story
Ps - Great sense of humor
---- by Filthy Heather lol
mufarasuRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This review will contain minor spoilers.
Style:
Can't say I'm a fan. The majority of each chapter is character dialogue and interaction. Really lacking in description just about everywhere. I think I read somewhere that the author is being "vague" about things on purpose or something like that, but still. It's okay to be vague about some things that maybe you don't feel confident enough to describe, or you feel your readers will be better off imagining it on their own. However, there is just too much that's left open. Descriptions are necessary as both filler content and material for world building. As it stands now, the story flow feels way too fast as there are no descriptions that help to slow down the pace.
That being said, character interactions is where this story really stands out. No beta MC, or furiously frustrating heroine here. Despite the cliches and typical character archetypes that abound this story the characters have vastly different attitudes compared to most other contemporary works of simlar genre leading to a work that is both refreshing and pleasing to read... for the most part. It is also nice seeing an atypical genre on this site.
Story:
The story itself is nothing special. If you've watched romcom's before then chances are you've seen similar settings and characters being used. Though I will say it's nice seeing a married couple that match each other age-wise with the only gimmick being the rich girl and poor (relatively smart) boy getting married. No real deeper plot besides day to day shenanigans as of chapter 14.
Grammer:
I'm not a grammer expert, so I'll never give anyone five stars for this category. I will say that I haven't noticed any glaring errors, however there is always room for improvement.
Characters:
Again characters are typical archetypes used in this genre. The selling point of this story is their interaction. That being said there is quite a bit of room for improvement in this category for the author.
First up, our MC appare