The World Inside a Dream

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Description

Lucius, a simple seventeen-year-old student, had a dream of another world that sparked his interest. The dream seemed to be no ordinary dream. Lucius could move without problem, use all five of his senses to their full potential, and fully remember what happened. But when he encountered a massive, strange flower, his life was changed forever. What seemed to be a normal dream turned out to be something much, much deeper than what he thought.

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*Any and all things in this story are a work of fiction. Nothing is real, even if it takes place in the real world.*

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: aaronburn

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
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riceeeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's an interesting concept that takes inspiration from the transmigration genre, and turns it into something a bit different.
Style - The writing is nice, though there are times when there are jarring details that are written inside parentheses that could've worked if it was written normally. There are also words or phrases that are repeated throughout sentences.
Story - It's still in its beginning stages, but there are a lot of possibilities regarding the MC's situation and how it affects his real world.
Grammar - There are a few typos here and there which is fine. The only glaring problem though is that there are some weird sentences or phrases, but it's nothing a simple edit could fix
Characters - Pretty early on, we get introduced to two groups of characters: the 'real world' characters and the 'dream' characters. It's still a bit early to judge their characterization, but I'm looking forward to how these two groups will interact and affect the MC
Overall a very interesting concept that has lots of room to grow! Go read it!