The Witch of Langle Field

Self-Published

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Description

My name is Hisami Enatsu, a seventeen-year-old highschooler living in Japan. Unlike most girls my age, I was born with a sickness that made me dependent on medications. But, despite this setback, I still tried my best to live a normal life, even meeting my three best friends along the way.

However, all of this came to an end during my surgery. When I regained consciousness, I was face-to-face with a goddess, informing me that I died and told me that she was planning to reincarnate me as an immortal being.

Now, having given a second chance in life as an immortal (overpowered) witch in a fantasy world, I start anew in this new land full of adventures and opportunities!

Even as 700 years come and go, I'll do my best to live my new life to the fullest!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Fayare

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 105
Views: 31,989

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

NerphyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
When I first read this,I thought it was going to be like every other isekai. But it was a lot more unique. It focuses more on the life of an immortal than the isekai it self. And the author really knows how to write an emotional novel.
In my opinion,this is worth a read even if it is quite short. And I hope the Author will continue writing the story.
Little RacoonRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Overall, I think the story is pretty average, and although the author played around with some tropes, I don't think they decided to experiment and subvert some of them, resulting in a pretty standard story that doesn't have too glaring of issues but also lacking a scene that hits particularly hard.
Style: 3.5 stars. There was a lot of straightforward narration, which does make the story flow rather linearly and not having any confusing parts. However, that also makes it slightly on the bland side.
Story: 2.5 stars. I apologize for being quite harsh for this one. The story as a whole seems to be a collection of separate events, and the 700 year timeskip in my opinion felt a little too... weak? It felt more like a timeskip of, say, a year or two despite the story telling us much has changed in the world and the author's familiar environment.
Grammar: 3.5 stars. There were jumps between present and past tense in the story that felt a little inconsistent at times, even if it didn't detract or derail the story too much. Flow is decent, but I personally think some paragraphs can be merged together and leave the one/two sentence paragraphs hitting harder.
Character: 3 stars. Hisami felt a little bland without many emotions. I feel like the author could've played or dived deeper into the emotional boredom that came with immortality. I did see an effort in a chapter, but with 700 years of doing almost nothing, surely the madness is beginning to set in for a human frame and mind that usually can't comprehend beyond 70?
It's not bad by any means, but the author, as they continue to write the story, can experiment on subverting the tropes to make it stand out amongst the thousands of litrpg isekai stories. I do see an improvement in the writing style as the story goes on, though, so I have good faith that the author will continue to make this isekai a stronger tale.
TsaimathRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story has an interesting premise, though the execution is sadly lacking.
The world-building suffers from the usual "adults are idiots" trope, though it might be expanded to everyone is an idiot, sadly includingthe main-character. That leads to series of events that just shatter any suspension of disbelief and break the flow of the story, if you dare think about it. That, in turn, destroyes any hope for a plot-driven story, no problem, slice of life can be cool, too.
Sadly, there's not really anything there, either, maybe due to time-skips and the incredibly stupid main-character.
So, overall readable but nothing that makes me want to read more