The Watchmaker

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“Cripple” Ross and misfortune were kin, close as a shadow on a sunless day. Yet, in Ross' eyes, the fellowship was a curse, a malignant growth he wished to excise. On numerous occasions, it had wronged him, and in its final act of malevolence, it robbed from him the gift of a lengthy life. 'Unjustly', Ross would often grumble.

In a grand play of destiny, however, Ross finds himself thrust into a mysterious Victorian-era magical world teeming with dark secrets, ancient and powerful relics, potions, secret societies, and aberrations defying all sense of logic. A fool's paradise...

Presented with a favorable second spin at life, Ross becomes optimistic, however he would soon discover that things are not as simple as they seem...

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Reed Riddles

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(3)

HybriditeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far I have loved every thing in the story so far and I can't wait to read more. Even though there have only been a couple of chapter the author has been able to make the main character actually grow as a person which is a things I can't say for every story on this web site. I just really love all of it, the setting, the premise(I am a really big fan of these types of magic story's) and with the type of magic that the author just gave the mc I'm really exicted to see what he does with that, and even if there is not a lot of magic combat I am more than willing to keep reading so I can see your amazing characters.
Any how, please keep writing stormeyy and I really hope more people can also enjoy this wonderful story.
I can't really say much else without feeling like I might be spoiling the story beats and I do not want to do that.
Will say grammar looks perfect. But I'm no English professor as you can see from my writing so if your real picky take it with a small grain of salt.
Style... I'm not really sure what that would be but I think the writing as a whole is amazing.
ShadowDraculRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So, I stumbled upon this hidden gem of a novel through an ad, and it whisked me away to the enchanting world of Victorian-era magic. I was instantly hooked. What really amazed me was the character development—so much development in just 20 chapters. The author skillfully weaves together elements of aristocracy, magic, political intrigues, and the mysterious backstory of the MC’s parents and their hidden factions/goals, adding depth to the world-building. One thing that stood out to me was the way family interactions were portrayed within the noble house where the MC was born. It was simply so lovely. The author has a talent for making the characters feel real and relatable.
The writing style flows smoothly, without overwhelming paragraphs of info-dump. Instead, the author sprinkles in tidbits of world-building that are a joy to read. It keeps the pacing engaging and the story intriguing.
Speaking of the story, while still in its early stages, it progresses at a steady pace. By chapter 20, the protagonist reaches the age of 10 and discovers magic, the story should starts to take a more exciting turn now. So far It’s a gradual but satisfying advancement that keeps you invested.
Grammar, Though I'm a non-native English speaker, I found no major grammar or structure problems. The writing flows nicely and is quite enjoyable to read. It’s a testament to the author’s skill in crafting a polished narrative.
Now, let’s talk about the characters. The MC’s growth and evolution within those 20 chapters is seriously impressive. It’s a standout feature, but it’s not just the main character who shines. Even the side characters have depth and purpose. They don’t feel like mere backdrop; they add substance to the story. The parents, in particular, undergo significant character development, which adds to the richness of the narrative.
All in all, I highly recommend giving this book a read. It’s a hidden treasure that’s worth your time and attention. So go ahead and dive into this cap
charly.secondaryRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Saw the title, got intrigued and stumbled upon this little gem here. It´s still pretty early, but until now I really like what I see. The magic system makes me curious of whats to come and I really like the pacing.
This is an early review an I will come back to write an more extensive one as soon as the storry is more devoloped. Till then 5 stars from my side