The Vampiric Lover
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Kamen was a young man who had recently graduated from high school and was looking forward to the next chapter of his life. However, fate had other plans for him. One day, while wandering in the woods, he stumbled upon a mysterious man named Alistair. The two started a conversation, and Kamen found himself drawn to the enigmatic stranger. Little did he know this chance encounter would change his life forever.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- rockingashe
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 17,197
Chapters(41 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- barbiekilla19Royal Road★★★★ 4.0It's pretty interesting, I'm glad you finally came back, and clearly better!
The writing is better and it shows that you really improved on your mistakes, along with the way the story flows, you have a really good novel that I would love to see get to the top some day! - asdkillaRoyal Road★★★ 3.0It's okay I guess, some parts of it seem kinda forced and really confusing .
But I can see why people would like it, I think that if you continue down the path your taking then youll be good in no time. It does seem weird that no one else is reviewing this. It looks like you actually care about your novel. - Chris78Royal Road★★ 1.5So far the story is barely coherent. you really need to proofread what you’re putting down. It might make sense in your head, but something isn’t translating very well when you write it out. Don’t stop trying, but at the same time, get a couple of friends go over with you after you finish writing it down you’re probably get better results.