The Upgrade System

Self-Published

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Description

The protagonist is killed by his parent.After dying he gets reincarnated with an upgrade system that upgrades anything related to him.To get his revenge on his 'parents' he upgrades the talent that killed him, into something with limitless growth rate.My reasons for why you shouldn't read the story.I'm not good at writing so don't bother about this story if you want top quality novel.English is my second languageI post the moment i finish the storyI write whatever comes to my mind when i write a chapter.I have posted this story in web novel

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
L1_a

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.3/ 5.0
Followers
29
Views
65,663

Chapters(37 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • lilb305Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The author has dropped this novel for religious reasons. It's a good story nevertheless, but it will not continuing.
  • aisenfield-kunRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    i haven't read the story much, but there is a problem that need handling ASAP, namely the spacing. specifically spacing between pharagraph. i'll be blunt, no one would give this story much mind if you didn't fix this problem. one advise i can give you is to make no more, no less, than one space for each paragraph to ease readers.
    i'll give a temporary score of 3.5 for being a writer. i'll probably change this review in the future depending how this story turn up.
    p.s. if you're using MS Word, you need to know that there's an option to set how much spacing you will be given after each time you press enter. this doesn't carry over to RRL, so you either has to fix it manually here or change your MS Word setting.
  • MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Authors Notes are longer than the chapters... The text is too tight together and the story does not flow. Every chapter feels like an info-dump. Like it is trying to get certain info across to the reader. Without telling a story or really drawing the reader in. Makes everything very clunky... difficult.