The Union

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He enjoyed the city's splendor from the balcony of the palace. It was dazzling, worthy of the Gods' envy- if they even exist.He felt something soft and warm embrace him from behind. Arms wrapped around his belly."What are you thinking about?" she asked while sniffing his back."Would you believe me if I said that I was thinking about you?" he turned around and feasted his eyes upon her pretty face."I wouldn't" she shook her head and grinned."Why?""Because I've fallen for your sweet words many times before and I will not fall into your trap again"He whispered to her ears, "What if I say that I'll give you the world?""Cliché" she smirked"What if I say, that I'll give my life for you?""Too tragic" she laughed"What if I say that" he rubbed his nose against hers "I will love you with all my heart"She smiled "Then I'll have no choice but to fall for your sweet words again"*****************Hello readers. Hopefully this tells you what the novel is all about.- Romance (Early romance and no harem)- Power Couple- War, Politics, Kingdom building (because of this, the main demographics of this novel are male readers. But female readers can also read this because I will make sure that the romance will not degrade over time)- Medieval setting- A touch of gore and violence (not so much)Release rate - one chapter/dayMap of Western Castonia -https://imgur.com/5ZsaoCgMap of Eastern Castonia- https://imgur.com/kST4PiAMore maps to come as the story progresses.Note: The cover is of course not mine

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: CookiesAndCream

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 249
Views: 217,107

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Community Reviews(5)

ZadarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall this story is very good.
There are minor critic points like better explaining how some information are acquired by the characters but the story is always believable.
evilshadowelfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is one of the best novels I have read so far. whether I look at the grammar, pacing, characters, or plot it is all top notch.
It even has a few of those chill inducing lines that I love so much.
Gets a five from me.
RedacreRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A well written novel.
I haven't seen any mistakes, or i just auto correct them in my head.
but i would recommend this novel to people want a enjoyable read.
elerarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Let me start off by introducing myself and my interests in this website. I am a 21 year old mechanical engineering student looking for interesting novels regarding magic or scifi. Most importantly however I search for stories with an enticing setting and characters that feel real. This is where this story excells. The kingom with all of its politics, people and intrigue feel real, the chemestry between the couple is realistic and their interactions human. However the MC seems somewhat flawless, while I think the characters in this novel are much more rounded than in most novels found on this site I would encourage the author to play into Timothy's weaknesses more than he already has. With this I do not mean that Timothy is a mary sue or that he ought to be made funerable to everything however during the battles I noticed that all his plans worked flawlessly and that the enemy commander was very eager to walk into his traps. While I understand that this orriginates from the commanders personality it does not allow for Timothy to react to unforseen setbacks. Seeing that Timothy has an excelent intelect I think it would be good for his plans to sometimes only succed partially.
Anyone has insecurities and flaws and by profiding a character with these flaws your novel will become better as there will actually be a chance that the MC struggles or that he might even fail. Never the less I wish to applaud you with your writting so far, no sidecharacter has ever felt as a tool to just push the story allong. Each of them have had good reasons and motivation behind their actions.
To conclude: I recommend this novel to everyone on this site
chayRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
the story so far seems good.
the only flaw would be the grammar, still above average, it could be better.
the error are mosly about tense you're using the past tense however you sometimes forget about it (can should be replaced by could, even if it's correct the 's is more used as is than was).
the story is reallly good however the more i read the more the grammatical flaw break my immersion in the story.
some edit would be great, just to correct those annoying flaw on this gem
i'll update the review as i read the story
i just saw the lack of new chapters i hope the story isn't dropped