The Ten Realms
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Description
People Started falling down in pain at first.
Then they saw screens and could sense an energy within them called mana by the screens.
These people could gain skills, cast magic and do the impossible.
Two weeks after, without fail, they disappear, never to be seen again.
It was called the two week curse.
Erik West was a combat medic, he was trying to save his friends lives, then he was blown up, leaving him with just one arm. At first he thought he had an infection, but then comes the news. He has the two week curse.
Let's just see if there is such a thing as healing magic.
Current release schedule:
3 chapters per week, coming out on Monday, Wednesday and Friday
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Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Michael Chatfield
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2,114
- Views
- 1,483,773
Chapters(92 total)
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Community Reviews(10)
- Black_War789Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0I started reading this story before the re-work and I enjoyed the story but I lost interest with every new chapter, when the re-work was announced I decided to drop this story because I didn't want to have to re-read all of the chapters that I had already seen. However recently I decided to just have a look to see what changed... I have now binged all the way to current, I can honestly say that the re-work while being a different story to the original it is far better.
The story feels more like a story it does just jump from plot point to plot point but instead flows through plot points increasing in depth as the story progressess.
I have to say that i enjoy the story now and can only ask the author for more, keep it coming. - Quartz RingRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is a really refreshing take on the healer class.
Though it is too early for an advanced review Mr Chatfield never lets me down when it comes to his world building and overarching plot. So keep up the amazing work good sir, and I cant wait for more! - ceaserRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0funny thing as i was also a combat medic in the army, and i really like your story.
i find it relateable, down to earth, and generally well written.
keep up the good work ! :) - nerdy_n_dirty86Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0I had given this story five stars before your "re-work" and now just changed this to 1-star. You did not even give an explanation as to why you decided to re-work everything. This completely destroyed your story. I tried to give this a shot again but I couldn't even get past the third page. I will try to come back later and see if you fix these now glaring plot holes, bad character development, etc. I loved your story and was activily reading this everytime I received a notification a new chapter was up. But not anymore.
- RascozillaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This has been a fun read so far. The gramar has been solid, the world building is good. There is the rare typo here and there, but not enough to bother me. Interesting mix of older tougher MC transported to RPG/cultivation realm(s) with his best buddy (who also happens to be a badass but with an awkard name...?). I was worried when the Author deciding to rewrite their story, we lost the magic fish ponds,but we get to enjoy the adventures of this dynamic dou.
The Save - masonrhadeRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I loved your first attempt at this story and i really digging your second attempt.
I'm excited to see where you go and how much from the original story attempt your going to keep.
I'm a fan of your other work and a huge fan of this one. Just wanted to leave you a nice review and tell you to keep up the good work. - CyclopsSlayerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Our two MC's maybe too competent for words, but that is what makes them so much fun.
Two modern soldiers, given a warning they are to be summoned prepare to take their next world by storm. And boy do they ever!
Seems that no one thought to explain the rules, the way things work to these two. So, instead of adapting to the established way to do things, they use modern methods and learn the way on their own.
Fun. I can only hope book 2 is as much fun. - mad-nessRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Picks up steam as it goes.
I like the world/game/magic mechanics. Clean, non-preachy 'cultivation' system combined with more traditional litrpg magic system elements.
I think that this story might really take-off in the following books and am looking forward to future releases.
Nothing heavy/deep but fun litrpg. - MnesymneRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I'll talk about all the books i've read in this serie even though only 1 book is on RR.
The first and second book are an interesting take on the LitRPG/Isekai genre by incorperating "modern" ideas in the new world. The characters are interesting and have a personality, and the worldbuilding is great.
When reading the later books the quality starts to suffer. Sometimes it feels like chapters are in the wrong order, talking about events like they have already happend and only later reading these events, not as flashbacks but as they are happening.
Eventually even the writer starts confusing names and using them incorrectly.
I've stopped reading halfway through book 5 when the story started to suffer because of these things. Up untill that point it was a great story.
Might be possible to fix this by just having someone re-read the books and fix stuff - KamiKira00Royal Road★★★ 2.5To begin with this story is quite good, whole idea and implementation is good. It was quite unique take of idea of transporting to another world, healer MC, I liked it quite a bit, it was my favourite.
But about 10 chapters or so, I started to realize this story is opposite of what I thouth it would be. MC strenght is not achieved by his own effort, he gets best opportunites, skills and items just because he is MC, just because he is lucky. Side characters are not really believable, to MC they are just too good, without any other intentions they are helping him. Choices of MC are dumb(or not planned out) it feel like everything he's done is just to make him cooler, and make this stories battles into brute fights, not smart ones.
Other thant that, writing style is quite good, didn't spot any grammar mistakes(I am not native) But story and characters are really bad, at least for me