The Tale of a Reincarnated Aristocrat.

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Description

After dying while saving a classmate from a car accident, young Suzuki Haruto awakens in the body of a six-year-old boy, now an aristocrat in a new world. Will this second life offer him the peace and happiness he seeks, or will it bring new challenges?

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Status
Ongoing
Year
2022

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Rating
2.2/ 5.0
Followers
45
Views
33,677

Chapters(62 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Federated SunsRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Style: Mostly short chapters that I read so far, very simplistic with no real effort put into world building or descriptions for the most part. Very bare bones with mostly a few lines of words and no real paragraphs. Also very rushed and not very fleshed out.
    Grammar: Some mistakes here and there but mainly odd little mistakes.
    Character: Kind of bland and cookie cutter, nothing that really makes them stand out from all the other stories like this.
    Story: Very generic, rushed and short chapters without much detail don't give the readers much to latch on to. Seems like your generic reborn into fantasy world we've seen dozens of times by this point. Story needs more work into the chapters to flesh them out, a protagonist with a more unique personality that isn't bland and something to really make this story unique and stand out amongst all the other stories like this would be helpful.
    I'm certain if the author put more work into the story it could go places. I do hope the author learns to take their time to flesh out stories more in the future as I'm curious what they can make if they put in more effort.
  • John BattistaRoyal Road
    1.0
    The reincarnation happens quickly and we start adjusting to the new world. But the perspective seems to hop all over the place following the reincarnation.
    A month after reincarnation he comments of having a good 2md day of reincarnation.
    He... maybe got some of the memories back? It wasn't clear.
    He spends a whole day sharpening a sword only to suddenly join a tea party?
    He's incredibly confused to see a car.... commenting that he thought it was a fantasy setting.  But if there are cars and airplanes you'd think the lights and bathrooms would be advanced?
    The jumps from place to place are jarring and make it hard to get into the story.