The Tale Of A Dancing Fate
Community Rating
Description
Daniel Faust was a mildly talented, underachieving, slightly lecherous data analyst who wanted nothing more than to live a simple life with his darling wife, Anne. For him His life was perfect, or at least it looked that way to him.Until life threw a curve ball at him.They diagnosed him with cancer. The doctors were adamant that Dan wouldn't last long without surgery, so he would have to be on chemotherapy for six months at the very least, so Dan did exactly that. He went on chemo only to lose his hair, his job, his wife, and then finally his life. Dan wasn't really expecting a whole new gig in life afterdeath because of cancer.He was hoping for peace at the very least, but the universe had something else entirely in stock for him.Dan was thrust into a body of a child thrown into a world he barely understood with powers that he needed to hide, with a name that was not his but was his, and a life that was not worth much to anybody but himself. Meet Our protagonist as he tries to survive in a hostile world of magic power cruelty and things unknown that in every right should be nothing but stories and myth. Join him on a journey as he encounters old gods, dark elves, blood elves, night elves, high elves, dwarves, goblins, orcs, and mythical beings not to mention humans of all kinds, He is cursed with a cruel fate, and to escape that fate he needs to figure out his mysterious powers and who he can trust and who is out to kill him...or worse.
. Disclaimers: This story will contain eastern name settings as well as western setting names, so eastern names based on Chinese and Japanese Names in this setting will be presented with the family name before the given name (i.e., Last name first name). I would like to tell you, that I'm in no way, shape, or form a professional writer and that it will not be perfect. I will nonetheless strive to make it the most accurate and pertinent possible when it is due. I am, also, not a native speaker. My English skills are roughly 90% self-taught. You are welcome to correct my poor mastery of your tongue in the commentary section if you do it nicely, I'll correct my, multiple, blunders. Divine Warlock is my Second serious attempt at writing a story. It's heavily inspired by East Asia culture, folklore, and mythology, with the western magic element. I will try to write every day, with a goal of about 45,000 words per month (~1500 per day). Chapter lengths are random on average, I will be releasing chapters on the day they are ready.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- JDSin97
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 13,403
Chapters(31 total)
- Chapter 30Nov 16, 2022
- Chapter 29Nov 16, 2022
- Chapter 28Nov 16, 2022
- Chapter 27Nov 16, 2022
- Chapter 26Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 25Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 24Nov 14, 2022
- Chapter 23Nov 6, 2022
- Chapter 22Nov 5, 2022
- Chapter 21Nov 4, 2022
- Chapter 20Nov 2, 2022
- Chapter 19Oct 31, 2022
- Chapter 18Oct 22, 2022
- Chapter 17Oct 11, 2022
- Chapter 16Sep 7, 2022
- Chapter 15Sep 4, 2022
- Chapter 14Sep 3, 2022
- Chapter 13Aug 31, 2022
- Chapter 12Aug 29, 2022
- Chapter 11Aug 26, 2022
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(1)
- RedWingUaRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5A lot of formatting needed. The sentences are broken up into paragraphs. Absence of a capital letter. Missing punctuation periods. Different style of quotation marc. Different font in chapters.
All of this needs to be set to the same look before the text is published.
And I think, changing the narrative from third person to first person is a bad idea. Because the reader will be confused, and will think the whole time who am I is
The story itself isn't bad, but it's very hard to read it.
Style and grammar have a low rating so far.