The Start of a Unusual Life in an Alternate Reality(Soul-AR. You know like solar)

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"You ever wake up and just know that day is gonna be f****d?" Our protaganist is dealing with what we like to call, "Summoned Hero Syndrome", its when someone is kidnapped to an alternate reality/world/plane/or dimension and they start to narrate their life as if its a book. This is a story of his minds auto-biography. A story of action, adventure, intrigue, gore, comedy, videogames, references, and possible sexy fun times.

A.N: This is my first story and possibly my only one and it may never become finished. Please excuse any spelling and grammar mistakes. Im doing this on my phone and i hate the small ass keypad. Hope you enjoy readings and even if i may not like it feel free to give your opinions and CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISMS. I dont care for those who are being assholes that are non-helpful. I only care for the people who are helpfull. So if ur a smartass be so while helping. Also idk if im gonna add a harem. Some stories should have em while others shouldnt cause they cause a huge detraction, hope im using that right, from how good a book can be.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: TheLostBastille

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(5)

HexwolfxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This novel toke some intresting twists and turns to make a really neat read to past the time I hope you keep writing new ch for this novel. Also I hope Thia joins the harem!!!!!
bat159Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a different take on the classic Isikae story. Hero gets kidnapped and taken to new world. Then we start to diverge. Kidnappers screw up hero goes somewhere else instead, and we go from there.
Overall a very well written first attempt that does a good job of depicting a smart-ass as the hero. One who is open minded and takes things as they come unless you hit one of his triggers, then its all out. The most amusing of which pertains to food. Because of his ability to eat so much his nickname on earth was "the skinniest fat man". It is very amusing to see him react to the bully that dumps his food, literally pounding the bully into the food.
Good charachter development and very easy to read, a fairly well structured plot without too many glaring holes. The author gives us a good background on the main charachters, going into detail on their histories and showing some of the things that created the way the charachters personality developed.
The style wobbles once in a while, but that just shows the need for experience and a good editor. The same can be said for the grammar and spelling errors. Trust me, just about every published author will freely admit to the need for both editors and proofreadera to catch their slips.
Overall I highly recommend this book and this author.
LoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really enjoy this novel and I can happily tell you that this is one of the novels that inspired me to write my own novel, The Lone Wanderer.
Style: I'm not really an expert on this but I think it's pretty good.
Story: Not much yet but I like what you have so far, really like his ability.
Grammar: Generally good, could use a once over edit though to squash out some minor errors.
Characters: The only glaring weakness I can see. We know nothing about almost all of the characters so they seem pretty weak. This can be fixed with POV changes, flashbacks, more in depth interactions or heavy edits.
Keep up the good work, I really enjoy this novel.
SanuarteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's not everyday that you find a character with the wits of this MC. He does everything at his own pace and I like it. Keep writing like this and you will have a great story by the end of it all.
Arashi ZarosRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
check the chapter name "I explain some things",he explain most of thing on this novel (and stuff that you think is wrong or fail)
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/chapter/113453