The Shadow Paradigm - Book 1: Project Orb Weaver
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Gardening, cooking, innovation, preservation, charity events... Madzistrale, Tom and Gabzryel does it all. But when they encounter the mysterious Shiakar Paradigm Society, a clash of paradigms ensues. Although both groups are aiming to make humanity stand stronger, their ideals and methods could not be further apart. Between the trio's optimistic yet naive ideals, and the SPS's tried-and-true surgical methods, determining the answer which methods can better humanity is a struggle that both parties must resolve in their own ways...
Welcome to the final revision of my 10+ years ongoing novel trilogy. This revision took out some flawed plot concepts to re-introduce a more down-to-earth, film noir-like ambience, where a battle of wits is what will determine the outcome. It also added instead more in-depth expansion into the lives and mindsets of the characters, especially the heroes (a missing factor in older versions). Third-view limited storytelling was also introduced more prominently over my favoured third-view omnipotent, with each chapters concentrating as much as possible on a single character's point of view instead of head-hopping.
The chapters here are now as closely finished as I can make them without professional help. They will be updated slowly from the existing 7th revision version, so please be patient.
Meanwhile, if you wish, you can download the full free PDF ebook from my website:https://melodierivers.weebly.com/the-shadow-paradigm-novels.html
As always, I welcome your comments and critiques, and I hope you enjoy reading that story as much as I did creating it!
A parting song to introduce the story:
Under neon lights, we claim this townNo one can take us down, no, not tonightCity boys and city girls, runnin' wild
Burning like a fallin' starGolden stardust, that's what we areYoung voices carry onCome together in the same ole song
We're still hereWe're shadows fallingThe night is calling againWe're still hereWhere love is runningThe night is calling, again
Brother to Brother
Another night, another townWalking my heart aroundSame old choices, againLike so many tears in the rainWill they remember your nameYoung hearts reach fearlessly, in the night
We're still hereWe're shadows fallingThe night is calling againWe're still hereWhere love is runningThe night is calling, again
Sister to Sister
We're all togetherYou know, I careWe are, we will, always be together
We're still hereWe're shadows fallingThe night is calling againWe're still hereWhere love is runningThe night is calling, again
Credit: "We're Still Here" by Steve PerryComposers and Writers: Brian West & Steve Perry2018 © Sony Music Publishing Canada, Worldwide West Music Inc., Love BoxMusic
The inclusion of the above copyrighted work has been done under the free share law under the conditions that the hereby work is not-commercial and not-for-profit, and with good faith that the work hereby does not violate, insult or misrepresent the original authors of the copyrighted material.
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- Hiatus
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- 2019
- Author
- MelodieRivers
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Chapters(59 total)
- Chapter 18 - The SuperiorsSep 30, 2019
- Chapter 17 - The City of GlassSep 27, 2019
- Chapter 16 - Cat and MouseSep 23, 2019
- Chapter 15 - Some Time AsideSep 20, 2019
- Chapter 14 - DelicatueSep 15, 2019
- Chapter 13 - LeitworstilSep 12, 2019
- Chapter 12 - Close to HeartSep 8, 2019
- Chapter 11 - Project VymanaSep 5, 2019
- Chapter 10 - A Fight of KindnessSep 1, 2019
- Chapter 9 - First Gear In MotionAug 29, 2019
- Chapter 8 - The CouncilAug 25, 2019
- Chapter 7 - Ordinary HeroesAug 23, 2019
- Chapter 6 - Two Siblings And A FriendAug 23, 2019
- Chapter 5 - A Slice of LifeAug 22, 2019
- Chapter 4 - Abraham SolomonAug 22, 2019
- Chapter 3 - The King's KnightAug 22, 2019
- Chapter 2 - OppositesAug 22, 2019
- Chapter 1 - The ElectionAug 22, 2019
- Prologue I - Jerusalem - August 7, 1099 A.D.Aug 17, 2019
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