The power of the Republic Indonesia 24 century on 20 century

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What happens when the 24 centuries Republic of Indonesia transported to another Universebut the same world as earth but on 20 centuries of the earth like 10 years before world war 1, what happens when from 20 centuries react to 24 centuries

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Halid Fathan

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ACTIONFANTASYHISTORICALKINGDOM BUILDINGSPACE OPERATIME TRAVELFIRST CONTACT

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0.8/ 5.0
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538

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  • rgreadsRoyal Road
    ★ 1.0
    But the results are rough.
    Grammar would be improved by writing in Indonesian or Jawa and using Google Translate to convert to English. It's hard to evaluate the story when I'm not sure if I understand the intended concepts and ideas.
    The quick summary is that far-future Indonesia is transported from 2450 to 1904. Writing this is clearly going to be extremely challenging for the author because the first encounter involved meeting an English dreadnought and her captain.
    The HMS Dreadnought, first of that type, was commissioned in 1906.
    Oops.
    The period's characters are similarly rough, and I doubt any English sailor from over a century ago will measure distances or speed (I'm not sure which is intended) in kilometers.
    The author is trying very hard, but their English and writing skills aren't there yet.