The Perfect Specimen

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ON PAUSE: FURTHER INFORMATION BELOW

In a world where zombies are common and everything is evolving to acclimate with radiation, our Main Character has a special trait about him that helps him acclimate and evolve with the harsh conditions as well. But where will that lead him, and will that be enough?

Take a look into my mind for what I like to consider "The Perfect Specimen"

Original posting can be found at

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11219113306294805/The-Perfect-Specimen

------------------------------------------------It's my first novel and I am writing here to just get some feedback. Please don't hold back and give me everything you got. I'll take mindless rants and very constructive good criticism. I just appreciate the fact that you took the time to read and review if you did!

Further update. This novel is now on pause. I have been taking everything in from the experience of writing this novel, both positive and negative feedback. I will revisit this novel in the future after I get a more concise picture of what direction to take it in. In the meantime, I am going to be writing another novel on my own time and after I finish it, I will begin the daily upload process. After I finish, I will come back and revise this story on my own time and re-post it after fixing everything I want to fix.

Thank you all so much for reading, I will be back with this and more stories in the future. Until then, be on the lookout for me! :)

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Kinoro TPS

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSSCHOOL LIFEMALE LEADHORRORNON-HUMAN LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
210
Views
115,487

Chapters(58 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • WorldsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The storys really great along with the concept it just sucks you in, with the sub plots the authors hinting at here and there im really interested. Grammer is a big plus as well which is kinda hard to find on RR; but the characters are still pretty much stock board atm which is normal considering the authors still fleshing out the mc but a few more chapters divulging motives and diffrent povs would be appreciated at least by me.
  • HickupsRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    While this fiction makes for an entertaining, casual read it still has very glaring flaws.
    The style is simple, day to day speech which makes for easy understanding but lacks any flourish and beauty. Coupled with regular grammatical mistakes and switches in verb tenses it leaves the reading itself neither enjoyable nor the opposite.
    Main cast aside, the caracters are flat, full of clichees and tropes and ultimately boring. Conversations are mostly devoid of wit and humor and everyone speaks in main clauses. All of which turns the mc power-creeping into the sole point of interest, while sub-plots don't get more than a cursory glance.
    What buggers me most though is actually the setting. Post-apocalyptic and zombie-infestated? Why, I haven't seen one since chapter 2. As far as I can tell, the author has no plans at making them an actual subject of the story. Zombieism is just the latest cultivator cheat with minor drawbacks.
    Summing it up, this is a cultivation novel and for all the entertainment it offers it sadly succumbs to near every flaw the genre entrails. My hope is for the side characters to gain more persona and agency as the story unfolds.