The Ocean Flame Palace Host

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Schedule: I am officially going on an indefinite hiatus. Sorry to all readers but I just don't have any more ideas.

Hai Yun is the youngest Divine Rank Alchemist on the Scarlet Flame continent. He was an orphan picked up by a wandering Alchemist Grand master and raised in the Crystal Ocean Alchemy Sect. As he soon got bored of refining other people’s recipes, he started creating his own. One such recipe was of an elixir that can allow one to retain their memories through reincarnation.

He thought this heaven defying elixir could bring about a new golden age for alchemists, to let them keep all of their experience after death. However  it only brings about a calamity as the other powers of the martial world immediately begin lusting after this divine object. They attack the Crystal Ocean Alchemy Sect en masse, razing it to the ground. To keep them from getting it, Hai Yun devours the Elixir and obliterates his body so they can never even find another trace of it in this world.

However, in his reincarnation a series of very interesting things happen…

Glossary:Wuxia Fantasies

***DISCLAIMER*** I do not own any of the artwork which was used in the book cover. It was found through google images.

The person in the background of the cover: https://writer.dek-d.com/Viieeww10/story/view.php?id=1414895

The dragon: https://rocketdock.com/addon/walls/36597

The palace: no real link to the artist, but there is this -

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Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • DragonGodSmith3000Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Awesome story
    The story seems to be coming alive as it goes along it has quickly become one of my new favs I really do hope neither of the 3 introduced main characters have to many issues when it comes to cultivating at sects they wise to destroy and I gotta say you got me defiantly hating the golden crow scared ground just because most sects wouldn't tolerate a young master doing that due to her being a mortal and so young it could affect the karma of the sect but makes you wonder what the other 10 sects can be like going forward n just how twisted are they I await the downfall and the next world when you get to it just because it's so far shaping up like this plane is nothing but the next one will be when ur story truly starts to find out origins and stuff but keep updating m writing its awesome so far man!!
  • Give_me_CAKE!!!!Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If someone is looking for a Xianxia where people fight for legitimate reasons, and not because someone was offended then this is definitely one of those. I remember reading the original drafts on your wordpress and I have to say that you have considerably improved them before putting them here. You've also made it go faster which is lovely. I remember in the old drafts we didnt meet Qian Mu till like chapter 15, but she enters the scene here in chapter 10.
    I dont really have much to say about the structure of the story or about things you missed, because the amount of background we have about the world is sufficient to understand the story at its current position. I remember that description in chapter 8 about the cultivation realms but it only mentioned the first 4 or so. I think the family fight is more descriptive of how many experts of which cultivation realms each family has puts the story into a better perspective.
    I know this is probably off the point but in comparison to your other works like God's Trial and TBHSE (I think its called To Break the Heavens and Shake the Earth, idk for sure), I would say this is the best, followed by TBHSE.
    Overral, Phenomenal job!
  • QtipRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    clad youth faltered mid action. Then he felt his entire body go numb and the vision distorted drastically. A long while after, when he returned to his sense, he discovered someone had soundlessly grabbed him by the small of his back and lifted him high into the air.
    A very burly man appeared in front of Yan Zhaoge with one hand holding the yellow clad man high in the air like an adult lifting a tiny child.
    The large man was all smiles as he said, “Prince, please go ahead.”
    Yan Zhaoge simply nodded. Folding his hands behind his back, he leisurely turned and left.
    The large man laughed cheekily while still holding the yellow clad youth with only a single arm. Conversely, the youth could only wail.
    Yan Zhaoge entered the main gate of his sect. As he walked, the smugness he displayed earlier had already disappeared without a trace. His expression had become completely tranquil.
    At a glance, he appeared to possess a calm and steady demeanor.
    But the true connotation behind his cu
  • TreyonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Well, there is still to few chapters for me to give a better opinion but i waited after reading chapter 6 until the MC awakens and blows away everyone and smack their faces with dirt and make everyone regret it until their insides turn green and they die from shock XD
  • zxnorbrezRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    i feel like the world is lacking in its world building, would have licked some more history, more description of the characters, maybe more in depth of your cultivation heiarchy what each level entails their benifits and such. maybe a map too, or just a hiearchy of all the world powers, plus more knwoledge about the gods. youve layed alot of information but they are very un complete, not detailed enough. there needs to be more of a structure i think and then u can keep building on top of that like a foundation, and not parts of each thing.
  • SiftheWolfRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    I read the first three chapters, and then had to go the hospital. The reason being I cut myself on all the edge.
    Seriously man, that stopped being cool in the 90s.
    Also when you were writing this, did you just go through a cliche checklist to see how many you could cram into the first 10k words.
    I know this seems harsh, but you got potentail. Please graduate from the 8th grade.