The Mask delivered to me
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A random mask appeared to Red's House out of nowhere.
Upon wearing the mask on, strange things begins to happen. Bad luck would seemingly be stuck with him as he gets in new troubles one way or another.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Aphath
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 33
- Views
- 71,484
Chapters(157 total)
- The BerserkerSep 27, 2022
- The Training - Part 2Sep 27, 2022
- Child's Daily lifeSep 27, 2022
- The Training - Part 1Sep 27, 2022
- The OnmyoujiSep 27, 2022
- ArrestedSep 27, 2022
- Conversation - ISep 27, 2022
- The MeduzaSep 27, 2022
- The PredatorSep 27, 2022
- EncounterSep 27, 2022
- The Mystery of the missing studentsSep 27, 2022
- School days BeginSep 27, 2022
- The First DuelSep 27, 2022
- The Fist FightSep 27, 2022
- The WeirdSep 27, 2022
- BoxSep 27, 2022
- The MaskSep 27, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- JusttryingtofindawayRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The premise is quite interesting, a mask makes its way into the authors posession and all sorts of shenanigans ensue. However that is where the issues start to crop up. It's told in the first person and has an extremely low level of detail spent towards the setting. There are no major gramatical issues but the specific scene where the author decides to use asterisks to convey sound really grated on me. I would reccomend changing the way the story is told, or the style from first to third to facilitate better detail in the setting.