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Since this a popular genre, i thought that i would write a couple as well, see how i get on. I'm a college student, hoping for a career as an author but don't expect me to write like George R.R Martin or Darren Shan, as after all i'm a rookie, so i hope that you all could help me writing my first web novel. :)

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First manga gamerRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Amazing a b c ccccccc dccc ccv ff fvt t tvtvtvt tg gb gb gbg gbhbhbh bhb bgg vv gb gbbb i hope u the novel dosent get discontued please it good novel

IronDragonRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

I really this this story has great potential. The initial chapters are well written and the time travel will make the plot so much more interesting than the standard gamer power story. In the case of this tale the main character isn't gaining power for no reason his backstory allows it to seem almost reasonable. The addition that mages are somewhat common also adds a cool layer and more powerful enemies to the story without breaking the immersion.
p.s. i hope you expand on the fact that the general populace do not know magic exists and if there is a sort of wizard law.

Wayang Emperor 'The First'Royal Road

★★★ 2.5

What! Did you re-write this story or something? Because i think i read the same story back then.

SedactiveRoyal Road

★ 0.5

Ok so i read the syno i tought i could enjoy this till i went on to read the actual novel.
Apart from the barf inducing Main character i find my self questioning the logic mister GENIUS is basing all his geuss work on i will give an exmaple (slight spoiler incomming)
In chapter 1-2 the mc sees a blue screen in the corner of his vision before he gos to bed he proceeds to check the blue box like its natural as he plays so many games he says the notification says something about a tutorial and he says nah no need after he opens his status window to check his stats ect under the class catogry he sees 3 classes and remakrs that he probally got those from his parents and i am like what is he basing this on?
This is only 1 of the remarks he makes as for the rest THE WHOLE FREAKING CHAPTER is filled to the brim with such bullshit!!
First i dislike the MC almoost puked but still a story is a story so i proceed to read but i can almoost not follow the tought process of the author nor that of the MC as its just plain dumb what else is there left to like about this story.
And before someone says this aint good advice i am not here to give advice i am here to tell what i find about his novel and he can do whatever he wants with my opinion this in itself is advice as he knows that there are people who think his novel is garbage wow.

The Legendary Gamer

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