The Last Observer (A Soft LitRPG Progression Fantasy)

Self-Published

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Description

Follow Seth, an unbecoming child of an important family, as he finds himself in a world different from the one his parents had paved for him, guided by words in the air and the voices in his head.

He'll find odd solace in the command of a man capable of ending things without batting an eye, learn from priests that are not what priests are supposed to be, and attain powers quite different from what the world is accustomed to. He will face brothers that hate him, loyalty he does not believe he deserves, and tests he's very certain are rigged.

Pain will be his ally, weakness will plague his beginnings, and loss will stand a companion in varying times as he races towards power before he meets with a future already deemed inevitable in a fate of countless possibilities.

This is a slow burn lengthy coming of age Grimdark, Litrpg fantasy. It also has a weak to strong Mc element.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: The First Observer

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 1,577
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Community Reviews(10)

R.BRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Story is well written and paced with a nicely balanced world building.
But to me the crux of the matter is the main character starting rather originally, or maybe, in a rarely depicted way. Weak but not martyr-drama and not becoming god in 5 chapters.
There's weight to everything. Substance to every paragraph. A hidden gem i'll keep an eye on.
abee4312Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I liked it
and for some reason reviews have to be 50 words long so I am just gonna keep typing in this run on sentence until I hit 50 words because I already said what I wanted to, it's weird just writing randomly, this should get me 50 words
Geronimo0o92Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story feels refreshing, the hardships that the mc faces are really well written , the world building is well written , still a bit foggy but it really feels like we know as much as the much as the mc about the world which is really immersive. If I had to give a flaw I would say that his family and background were really detailed when it seems that his story is going to be away from them, I hope we get to see more about the family dynamics and that it will be a relevant part of the story , I really enjoyed the detailled connection between the mc and his family :)
Pace77Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is great and I would rate 5 stars if it were only based on the later chapters. The truth is that until chapter 45ish, however, the story is largely uninteresting and hard to get into for several reasons. The biggest drawback is that early in the story we are faced with a godlike character where nothing is explained and events are simply happening to Seth for no reason. That early stage of nothing being explained, the future being pre-ordained, and excessive child abuse could easily be condensed down without losing anything of value to the story.
3lancaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
In the first 21 chapters we follow MC from a noble family, his drama with the main love interest and his family. His family sends him away due to his sickness and then some uber duber dickhead kidnapped MC and nothing else happened. No LitRPG elements so far. I guess its fine if you got nothing else to read.
EqualistRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I read up about chapter 20 or so. After all that worldbuilding was still confusing and chaotic. I dont think i liked a single character in this story even towards MC i was neutral. Pretty dark and angsty and not in a good way. A good way i would think about "Worm", just redicilously grim story where everything goes worse and worse but it was writen very well with interesting characters and comprehensive worldbuilding. Here i fail to find anything i like about this story, quality of writing is pretty okay but thats about it. MC just flong around with no direction or understanding in a grim world full of either bland or unlikable characters.
Slightly_MorbidRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This is yet another Chosen One story, starting as many of them before nothing really stands out with it. Nothing really good, nothing really bad. I might have followed it a bit longer, but I got too annoyed at one of the side characters who took on a mentor role, so I decided it was time to bow out.
Perhaps those who are newer to this kind of fantasy books will enjoy it more.
tkaliusRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The worst part is how unlikable and boring every character is in this story. They all just seem like a vessel to make the MC more angsty rather than add depth to the story in any way.
The writing is convoluted at times to the point I sometimes get the feeling english isn't the author's first language.
Without spoiling anything, there's some parts of the story that give me weird vibes with the themes being teased, which have nothing to do with grimdark, and makes me unwilling to read on to find out if the slow burn is rewarded.
drajitshRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The neutral score is because I did not finish the story, and probably never will.
Big fancy words are best avoided, because few can use them properly. The words are used are not malapropisms, and not quite purple prose something akin to it. They stick out like cobbles on a paved road.
Rusty_MagsRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I'm over 50 chapters in and the MC hasn't been actively guiding the plot in about 20-30 chapters. Makes it boring and me question why anything that happens happens aside from plot amor/the writer's wishes.
I'm not a fan of the multiple personality disorder either. The other minds are active in a way that the mc should be. They're also not funny, fun, interesting, or mysterious. And I think they're meant to be at least one if those.
The only thing this book has going for it is the occasional poetic phrasing that I enjoyed. Honestly, this book may have nurtured an appreciation of poetry in me but that is all the appreciation it nurtured.