The Last Horcrux

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Kel Kazan the undead death lord, stained and controlled by the abyss, bathe the world of Lordran with death and misery. Together with his seven generals, Kel Kazan led his armies of undead against all the living races of Lordran.

The numbers of the ever reproducing humans split by half. The great tree of life of the elves decayed and rotting. The great plains the beastmen and torrens called home were corrupted by the stench of the death. Many fell under the undead armies of Kel kazan.

Only under the combined might of all the living races did the great death lord finally fell. However, after be subdued and close to death, Kel Kazan made a final gambit and created his final Horcrux so that he may one day revive.

Now, after many years, Kel Kazan has finally returned under a new body as Nora Valen. Now alive again, the great death lord is now ready to take vengeance upon the abyss for controlling him! However, there were a few problems more concerning than his new gender.

How come there are orcs on Lordran? Why are the torrens extinct? Why am I level 1? Why are dungeons randomly spawning on Lordran? How much have things change since I died?

Special thanks to proofreader,ArchmageNaoki,for editing this from chapter 32 onwards.

Warning! This novel contains mature and dark themes.

This story is something I'm writing in my free time. Although I am a native speaker, my command of english is not perfect. So do expect a few mistakes here and there.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
htetsoe32

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADSTRONG LEADGENDER BENDERMALE LEADREINCARNATIONSTRATEGY

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
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304,793

Chapters(37 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • The.Not.Really.My.NameRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Let's talk about your fiction... it's quite good... grammar is sometimes... tricky, not much of character development, yet at least, and not much info on the world, but... it's just the beginning.
    So here are the main points
    Style- quite good... though i don't really care about it.
    Story- not much information on the world except morons(heroes), maggots(humans), hippies(elves), fluffies(beastkin), mules(torrens), their relations and slavery...
    Grammar- not bad, but... not ideal... if you still believe in ideal grammar that is... minor mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious.
    Characters- not much on their development yet, but i like your note of earthling>reincarnator(prince)>death lord> ?! Why am I a girl?
    Overall fun story, but you need to add the RPG genre in it... ALL PRAISE THE BLUE SCREEN!!!
    ...
    Sort of...
  • rafelingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    currently at chapter 14 and I'm quite liking it. in my opinion sir swagalot did us a disservice by giving this a bad review. apeantlt this needs to be 200 characters long so here goes. ugkycjtclubobyytvjnjbutrxykv;kj;m'knugoutcj bvovib pt viu  ig   vi;bip;vcyvi;óbuyfcuvbo'np\núfo76d6s7tÓno p8fo7 doug8yf7t;|Pn|P
  • korlinkiRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Story not bad, but not what you should expect after introduction you get OP demon lord necromancer who is reinarnated in body of girl. In this moment autor write from perspective of girl with girls problem and other boring stuff not OP World destoryer Demon Lord Lucifer Reaper Death Bringer so forget about it and focus on litle girl. PS. i remember sentence when she tell in city " we shoud not couse commontion" that not how behave Demon Lord Lucifer Reaper Death Bringer even on 0 lv he soud destory this city.
  • Sir_SwagalotRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Okay lets start with style. The writing is amuterish and ocasionaly disrupsts the stroy tellling as there is a certain redundancy in the way some actions are described. (Feels similar at times to some one describing a circle as round).
    Grammer. Again not good, better than some stuff on this site but i gets real tiring reading words that are written in the wrong tense.
    Story. Its been done before, simple as that. This work is no breath of fresh air into the lungs of our favourite cash cow.
    Character. Honestly there is not enough interactons with other chracter at this point (chap 10) to properly judge but what potential developement from what I have seen from the MC and minor chracters is shadowed by poor writing.
    All in all I might keep reading this but it feels more like a struggle to do so than an enjoyable experience.
  • blandanddullRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.The sir.
    I liked it... But the constant 'the sir' just drives me nuts.