The Last Abyssal

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Description

The Abyss, a never-ending realm of chaos and darkness, once invaded a young universe with its infinite army of insatiable abyssal, in the hope of destroying and devouring it as they did to many other realities.

Facing this new and powerful threat, the primordial gods of that universe along with the myriad races banded together to stop the abyss from devouring their home along with them.

After millions of years of endless battles, The primordial gods along with the myriad races managed to push the abyss back into the outer plane where it sprung along with the primordial seed of light planted inside.

Unable the prevent the purification and the collapse of his dimension by the primordial seed of light, the ruler of the abyss hacked a devious and diabolical plan. He collected the essence of every single remaining abyssal being including his own and created an egg of pure malice.

With the last remaining of his power, he opened a tiny crack connecting the abyss realm to the young universe and threw the egg inside along with the chilling message that reverberated throughout every plane, “I’ll be back to finish what I started.” before his dimension collapsed, killing everyone.

Now billion years have passed, and the primordial gods have long become myth and the thing of the past, new generations of gods have emerged one after another with each passing era.

The abyss and its terrifying hungry abyssal have long been forgotten until one day.

“Crack..............”

The cover isn’t mine , all the credit goes to this amazing artist who made it. If at some point the owner wants me to take it down, I’ll be glad to.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Astral 101

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.7/ 5.0
Followers: 82
Views: 27,403

Chapters(28 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

I_found_BACONRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love it so far. Been trying to find a good webnovel with a bloodthirsty nonhuman protagonist. Mc seems to fit the bill nicely. Hoping to see heavy horror elements where our abyssal mc strikes terror and dread among all races. Is this related to Martial World's Emperor Primordius who got stuck in an abyssal's body?
VenerabledemonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I came here without much expectation but I am very very satisfied with this. I for one mostly read evil mc's but this one is whole new level. I've noticed that fics in RR tend to be pretty long and sometimes a little confusing too but this one was easy to understand as my first language is not English. Loving this so far. Can't wait to read more of this gem.
doomsdayrsRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Overall, I have enjoyed reading this new entry. I am quite biased to an excellent read of evil. This seems like the start of a good story with a rich world.
But I must include criticism.
The perspective changes to abruptly, making it a bit jarring. Many stories will solve this via dividers between each chapter. Allowing perspectives to swap while enriching the details from the viewpoint of said character perspective. And I feel like the story might benefit from such.
For example,
I feel like many actions, just occur. Deaths, just happen. I feel like these can be expanded on by the viewpoint of those who die. Allowing us to feel their perspective and solidify in our heads "This MC is evil AF".
Update:
Oh! And consider a prologue?
Overall, author, please keep writing! I really wanna see the future of this new story!
TheLegate87Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Pretty good, interesting, but sweet baby Jesus you need a better naming sense, The dark evil forest is a bit odd
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