The Kiss of Two Moons
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The last year is upon us.
The world is ending, but you already knew that; everyone does.
Spring has come, and the flowers have bloomed here in this small town with no name. Thousands of different colours now paint the field that had been coloured by frost alone just yesterday.
The townsfolk have gathered by the field to celebrate the beginning of the last spring with so many smiling faces.
Tears too.
I can’t help but wonder whether the flowers will bloom again before the sky falls upon us. Others must be thinking the same.
There are moments when the smiles fade and their eyes glaze over as they realize just how near to the end we are. They forget it again in moments. Theymakethemselves forget.
The children aren’t like that, though. They don’t seem to understand, or they’ve come to accept it in a way that their parents just can’t manage to.
This one boy actually asked me why I was sad. I had to wonder whether he was actually aware that the world is ending, but it seemed wrong to mention it. I ended up just telling him that I was waiting for someone, and he scampered off, wearing a silly smile.
I can’t help but feel jealous of him.
The beginning of next spring; the day that the world ends. It seems so far away, yet so close.
Wherever you are now, I have to ask, how are you spending your last spring? Did you get to see the flowers bloom? Did you smile? Did you cry?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- FormlessChimera
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- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 36
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- 11,116
Chapters(27 total)
- Chapter 27 ~ DelusionsJul 21, 2022
- Chapter 26 ~ Trial of the Two MoonsJul 21, 2022
- Chapter 25 ~ DualityJul 21, 2022
- Chapter 24 ~ A Great HuntJul 21, 2022
- Chapter 23 ~ Night MarketsApr 14, 2022
- Chapter 22 ~ MadhouseApr 12, 2022
- Chapter 21 ~ DustApr 3, 2022
- Chapter 20 ~ The Road AheadMar 23, 2022
- Chapter 19 ~ Morning MourningMar 7, 2022
- Chapter 18 ~ DeathFeb 21, 2022
- Chapter 17 ~ Embracing SpringFeb 19, 2022
- Chapter 16 ~ FrozenFeb 10, 2022
- Chapter 15 ~ Knock in the NightFeb 2, 2022
- Chapter 14 ~ SpiritJan 25, 2022
- Chapter 13 ~ The Fireside in a SnowstormJan 18, 2022
- Chapter 12 ~ Making a ListJan 11, 2022
- Chapter 11 ~ SnowJan 9, 2022
- Chapter 10 ~ Two SidesJan 1, 2022
- Chapter 9 ~ Conclusion of the DealNov 29, 2021
- Chapter 8 ~ FlowersNov 15, 2021
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- Addicted_Reader720Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0The Kiss of Two Moons. A collision that will destroy all life that has ever lived, including our protaganists: Hope and Fate.
This is not a story about stopping that titanic collision. Rather it asks a question that most people must eventually face: How should one live knowing they are destined to die?
Mechanically the writing is excellent. Both in the basics like grammar and spelling, as well as the flow of narration between perspectives of the two characters. You can tell "who's talking" just by the way the perspective flows, even when Hope and Fate are in the exact same situation.
For all of the Philosophical and religious undertones present (which are respectfully handled), there is no lack of down to earth "slice of life" scenery, though I suppose the impending deaths of all the characters casts a shadow on everything.
The romantic elements are slightly generic eleven chapters in, but I am optimistic that the unique setting of the story will allow for something new to be developed before the end times occur.
I highly encourage you to give it a spin if you're looking for something new!