Description

In the land of Eldoria, Elara was but a simple house wife on the eve of a mystical festival. Little did she know that her life was going to be changed by powers outside of her control.

She'll be taken on a journey of self discovery, making friends, learning who her enemies are and of an interesting prophecy which could change the fate of the world as we know it forever.

What readers say about The Kingdom Of The Elements

“All in all it was a good read, not so overwhelming or revolutionary just a good read. Oh and please make the explanation more simple as exaggerated and rare words used for explaining can be a turn off for new reader who have never tried a book. In the end t…”

Son of LifeRoyal Road3.5 / 5

“[This review was spurred by a forum post.] Although nothing too groundbreaking, Whispers of the Forgotten has a pretty cool plot and nice imagery to boot. The vocabulary used in non-dialogue is enjoyable and really helps to visualize what's going on. On the…”

LacunyktRoyal Road3.0 / 5

Community Reviews(2)

Son of LifeRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

All in all it was a good read, not so overwhelming or revolutionary just a good read. Oh and please make the explanation more simple as exaggerated and rare words used for explaining can be a turn off for new reader who have never tried a book.
In the end this was a successful hunt for a new book for me.

LacunyktRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

[This review was spurred by a forum post.]
Although nothing too groundbreaking, Whispers of the Forgotten has a pretty cool plot and nice imagery to boot. The vocabulary used in non-dialogue is enjoyable and really helps to visualize what's going on.
On the cons side, things get slightly dicey. The pacing/progression of the story is a bit odd at times. There's also grammar, spelling, syntax, and structure errors that were quite frequent and noticeable, at least to me. Lastly, the development of the characters falters a little; it's sometimes difficult to get a grasp on their personalities and motivations. Dialogue can occasionally feel stilted as well.
However, I remain consistent in my belief that what a story is is much harder to figure out than how that story is presented. In other words, making all the puzzle pieces able to fit together is easier than actually assembling them together. So with some time and polish, this story has a lot of potential to evolve into something really great!