The Godless Paladin.
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This is a story of a man that is summoned across the universes to one where what otherwise would be called magic existed. Where a system had developed, that made gaining power simpler Where gods exist.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Malcolm Chambers
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 52
- Views
- 32,346
Chapters(34 total)
- 1.21d Interlude (Ester)Jan 2, 2024
- 1.21c Interlude (Ester)Nov 27, 2023
- 1.21b Interlude (Ester)Sep 26, 2022
- 1.21a Interlude (Ester)Sep 23, 2022
- 1.20b The Aftermath - Week 2 Day 7Sep 19, 2022
- 1.20a The celebration Ball - Week 2 Day 7Sep 16, 2022
- 1.20 The preparation - Week 2 Day 6Sep 12, 2022
- 1.19 Tournament - Week 2 Day 5Sep 9, 2022
- 1.18B Tournament - Week 2 Day 4Sep 2, 2022
- 1.18A Tournament Week 2 Day 4Aug 29, 2022
- 1.17 Tournament- Week 2 Day 3Aug 26, 2022
- 1.16 Training - Week 2 Day 2 EveningSep 14, 2022
- 1.15 Training - Week 2 Day 2Aug 22, 2022
- 1.14 Training - Week 2 Day 1 bAug 19, 2022
- 1.14 Training - Week 2 Day 1 aAug 15, 2022
- 1.13b Training - Rest Day 7Aug 11, 2022
- 1.13a Training - Rest Day 7Aug 10, 2022
- 1.12b Interlude (Lara)Aug 9, 2022
- 1.12a Interlude (Lara)Aug 8, 2022
- 1.11 Training - Week 1 Day 6Aug 6, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- UshouldknowRoyal Road★★★ 3.0This story has a lot of potential, but once it gets to the point where the team is forming it feels like it loses a lot in cohesion. It feels a lot like reading a lucid dream in all honesty. I think I understand what you're trying to do with it, but honestly a little bit of explanation or warning before the MC goes catatonic would be much better. Otherwise, I like the premise and I enjoy the world and system. If the main character was left aware of his surroundings, or we had a warning this could have happened would make it a lot clearer with what's going on.