The God of Lightning

Self-Published

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Description

The Lightning Clan lived in peace in the Divine Realm. But the peace didn't last for long when the demons began their assault on all the clans. On the brink of extermination, a baby was miraculously born. Giving their lives to activate their bloodline ability and a dimensional portal, the clan threw the baby into the portal, in hopes that it would one day grow strong enough to avenge their clan.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Eolymer

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 228
Views: 103,944

Chapters(30 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

AdeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So far there isn't really anything to complain about, and as far as i can tell from the few chapters, this has great potential. I just hope the author keeps up his great work
can't go wrong with a bookmark here!
4/5 because too much didn't happen yet, but with clear potential upwards.
PterodactylRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As of chapter 22, this story is fairly well written. The grammar has few to no problems and it can keep my interest, despite being fairly simple. One of my complaints would be that most of the characters are fairly 2D, but are improving.
I don't know if this would constitute as a spoiler, but just in case...
Spoiler: Spoiler
Astra's mother and father let Asta go to the academy quite easily, instead of wanting him to stay. This is sort of explained by his mom by saying that if he stays it will only hinder the growth of his strength, but they just kind of let him go easily. It is as if they knew him for like 4 months instead of around 12 years.
Also when Astra first attempts to use magic, his mother quickly dismisses him after about 10 seconds of him trying, which is a bit strange considering this is his first time trying. It's not like you can (usually) do something as soon as you learn, it takes practice.
Overall, this story is pretty good.