The Fourth Beast

Self-Published

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Description

In order for the Shinto Religion to survive, Amaterasu made a bargain with a hero from another dimension. Yes, she got their hero, but he was more than that. A savior, a leader, and someone who has the potential to reach the likes of Ophis and Great Red.

Note: This is a crossover between Naruto & Highschool DxD, focusing on worldbuilding and the mythical side of Highschool DxD. A small warning, this story can be considered as complete AU.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Alpha Dreamer

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 108
Views: 47,605

Chapters(43 total)

What readers say about The Fourth Beast

“It's an amazing story that actually does a crossover justice, rather than just have the characters exist and follow in cannon events with no meaningful changes or consequences. You also focus on other aspects and characters than what people usually focus on…”
LordSlothyTheFirstRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“This is one of the best DxD fanfics that I've read in a long while. The Naruto elements don't intrude too much into the setting and despite the main character being super strong he isn't overwhelming the narrative. I also like how the story is often told fr…”
Shadow8ingRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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Community Reviews(3)

LordSlothyTheFirstRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's an amazing story that actually does a crossover justice, rather than just have the characters exist and follow in cannon events with no meaningful changes or consequences.
You also focus on other aspects and characters than what people usually focus on, which just makes it more interesting and unique.
You've done a great job to keep Naruto faithful to his core characteristics while developing his character further and you haven't neglected the other important characters either, like Shiva, Yasaka and other big names, you've developed them well.
A good style with plenty of lore building + amazing fights, not going overly heavy in either direction but balancing it perfectly to make an engaging story that doesn't bore the reader.
Amazing plot with good and steady progression to keep things interesting, good foreshadowing of big events without having to hold the readers hand but relying that they are smart enough to figure things out and make the connections.
There's some grammar and spelling mistakes every now and then, but it's not enough to really take me out of the story or even distract me.
I absolutely adore this story with everything in my being, as I've made you well aware.
It's such an amazing quality, it's far and away my favourite fanfiction story of all time.
Shadow8ingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is one of the best DxD fanfics that I've read in a long while. The Naruto elements don't intrude too much into the setting and despite the main character being super strong he isn't overwhelming the narrative. I also like how the story is often told from other's point of view.
SolariumOnTheMoonRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The story does not have many scenes told through the main character's perspective, instead opting to tell them through the eyes of opponents and the people around the main character. While I enjoyed this concept, some readers may not appreciate it, so fair warning.
The main problem I have with this story is the grammar. While there aren't many spelling mistakes, the author repeatedly uses 'The heaven' when referring to locations and 'the Satan' when talking about multiple Satans (such as Serafall and Ajuka). Additionally, the author doesn't use contractions, making the writing come off as very robotic or formal. This may not bother some readers, but it bothered me.
Overall I give it three stars not bad but not as good as it could be.