The Forest Emperor

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2020

Author

Nevatrue

• Chapter thirty three: Subjects do as their told.
  Apr 29, 2020
• Chapter thirty two: Professionals
  Apr 25, 2020
• Chapter thirty one: Energy wave
  Apr 24, 2020
• Chapter Thirty: The sweet taste of
  Apr 23, 2020
• Chapter twenty nine: Indifference overwhelms you
  Apr 22, 2020
• Chapter twenty eight: I’m walking on Cen-shine
  Apr 21, 2020
• Chapter twenty seven: Why all this yelling?
  Apr 20, 2020
• Chapter twenty six: We all make mistakes, don’t judge.
  Apr 19, 2020
• Chapter twenty five: The heart wants what the heart wants
  Apr 18, 2020
• Chapter twenty four: You can’t trust anyone these days.
  Apr 17, 2020
• Chapter twenty three: Slice mundane babbling
  Apr 16, 2020
• Chapter twenty two: We could make a floating bed
  Apr 15, 2020
• Chapter twenty one: Feathers don’t weigh much
  Apr 14, 2020
• Chapter twenty: Would you trust a glowing mythical sprite?
  Apr 13, 2020
• Chapter nineteen: Burning bright.
  Apr 12, 2020
• Chapter eighteen: We need a team of researchers
  Apr 11, 2020
• Chapter seventeen: Can you see what I can’t?
  Apr 10, 2020
• Chapter sixteen: Can’t really say I know what I’m doing
  Apr 9, 2020
• Chapter fifteen: I’m a very busy man, you see.
  Apr 8, 2020
• Chapter fourteen: The revitalization of civilization in the modern day jungle
  Apr 7, 2020

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• Droy17Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It's rough in the edges but it's quite good and readable.
• Chilling_MonkRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I enjoy the flowing, airhead kinda storytelling if it’s done right. A good example would be  „the Aeon Tree“ Isekai. If you work on when to turn it up and when to turn it down you should find a style that works really well for your story.
  Unfortunately at the moment it’s all over the place to be honest and sometimes a little bit of structure would do a lot of good for this story. It happened quite often that there was a time skip/scene skip and I got confused because it was neither shown clearly in text or indicated by paragraph structure. Definitively work on your formatting. It’s not a lot of effort and doesn’t need to be perfect but as I mentioned before, structure will do wonders for you.
  I also feel like you lose a lot gravity you could give your story if u had it deal more heavily with the memory loss. Maybe give a prologue of Mcs first few deaths or something, this could give it a serious edge but at the same time guide it to the Mcs current State of being and his more lighthearted  /lowkey crazy Character.
  Nonetheless while this story has a lot to improve on it was still a fun read and I am excited to see what is to come
  ps.: feathers are naturally hollow.