The Flower-Like Shepherd's Sin

Self-Published

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Description

In a world full of wizards, arcanists, paladins, and even more cultists.In a world filled with sorcery, mana, divinity, and even more curses.We suffer and struggle.I'm getting tired of this.It's enough.It's time to change.

Who am I?I don't know,But I know someone is waiting for me.Who is it?I don't know.But he or she was waiting for my return.

They said I'm the cursed and sinful one.Yes, I am.

I am the most beautiful curse.I am the purest kindness sin.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2025

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
5
Views
2,921

Chapters(20 total)

What readers say about The Flower-Like Shepherd's Sin

  • I’ve read up to chapter 7 and I have something wanna write in this review. I know it’s quite early to post this because I only read up to chap 7 but i hope author can know the problem and what to improve after reading this. First the style, from the synopsi…
    TalkativeCatRoyal Road4.5 / 5
  • Oof, author you need to improve your writing and also some wrong tense appears in your story. But seems you said you're new author then ok I think you can improve your writing at future and also I'm bored so imma read it too. If somebody also wanna read thi…
    OfoyIzzRoyal Road4.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

  • TalkativeCatRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I’ve read up to chapter 7 and I have something wanna write in this review. I know it’s quite early to post this because I only read up to chap 7 but i hope author can know the problem and what to improve after reading this.
    First the style, from the synopsis I know is the world is filled with sorcery, mana, divinity, cursed. In the story seems there is also ordinary people who don’t have any super power. The style from the starts seems depress mix with warm feeling and turn to adventure and mystery.
    Second, the story is starts from a fairy tale? welp, that’s interesting for me. The story develops fast but sometimes lack of enough description on the scene. Please author you can slow down and think a little bit to make the scene have better atmosphere.
    Third, the characters. Some of the characters have their clear personality but some of them don’t. If the character doesn’t stay with the protagonist for too long or the character is not important then maybe it’s fine. This is a reminder for you.
    And finally the fourth, grammar. To be honest, the grammar is correct, it’s fine, but there is better way to write some sentences naturally because some of them feels unnatural. Pay more attention on what you wrote down then you can make the sentence smooth.
  • OfoyIzzRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Oof, author you need to improve your writing and also some wrong tense appears in your story. But seems you said you're new author then ok I think you can improve your writing at future and also I'm bored so imma read it too.
    If somebody also wanna read this book then...urm...eh... Maybe wait this author good in writing then you can start reading it
    Maybe I just give 4 stars, 3 stars is too harsh XD