The First World Sphere

Self-Published

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Description

SYNOPSISReincarnated with major advantages selected in haste. The new world is vast and hostile...a world almost infinite in scope. Essentially a Dyson Sphere created by magic and sustained by magic. A World Sphere. Can the MC delve into the mysteries of the sphere?

AUTHOR NOTE:

This story had a sizable rewrite (done). Hopefully, I corrected most of my grammar mistakes too! This book had 50 chapters before the rewrite. Patreon will have 30 advanced chapters.

I downloaded Grammarly! So I am doing my best to fix that MASSIVE amount of grammar errors.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Alwaysrollsaone

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,302
Views: 486,265

Chapters(44 total)

What readers say about The First World Sphere

“TLDR: Give it a try I read the story and liked it. I am not sure what to write. I liked the story, read the available chapters, noted it down so i can check it again in a few months if there is more of it. The author had a few works and is consistent, so ho…”
mplaysbgRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“I enjoy reading this story! I can not wait to read the next chapter. The MC makes use of situation to cheat. These cheats although powerful have drawbacks. Good use of imagination to breath new life into a common story type. To live on a Dyson sphere with b…”
Cyrus5145Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(10)

mplaysbgRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
TLDR: Give it a try
I read the story and liked it. I am not sure what to write. I liked the story, read the available chapters, noted it down so i can check it again in a few months if there is more of it. The author had a few works and is consistent, so hopefully yes.
I also wanted to note that as non-English reader, the grammar is ok. It gets better later on, it's not on the level of a native English writer, but if you're reading online fiction you can most likely give it a try and decide for yourself.
I really liked the world building so far, it's interesting and has possibilities for the future. The characters have motivations and i like them. The one thing I absolutely loved the system shown in the world.
Stormy feel a bit inconsistent from time to time. In book 2, he began to act more cold toward his companions and friend, i can't put my fingers exactly on it, but he just felt like a colder version of himself without a major event that will warrant it.
Another note is that he was "paranoid" about what will happen to his family, but continue to do thing that will endanger them. Like going to the ball, which was an important plot point and lead to an interesting end for book 2, but i just didn't like how he ended up going to the event in question.
The rational decision was to drop the whole thing. He even made a mental note, multiple times, that he is acting like a dumb teenager. He made a mental note about that, but i think it was going to be better if there was more internal dread. Stormy literary did the one thing, he decided to not do, in order to keep his family save. I think a bit more dread about what he did after the fact and how he maybe is more unstable or prone to mistakes that he initially thought was going to be better.
The girl for which he was on the ball in question died. She was the one character for which Stormy potentially was going to decide to stay home and not explore the world, and she just died off-screen. I don't like it. I mean, i didn'
Cyrus5145Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I enjoy reading this story! I can not wait to read the next chapter. The MC makes use of situation to cheat. These cheats although powerful have drawbacks. Good use of imagination to breath new life into a common story type. To live on a Dyson sphere with both magic and flying ships. I hope this author can continue to write for many years.
Brianna StormCloudRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I can not define what it is I like about this story, however it is really good! Easy to read with a good mix of action and detailed interactions between characters, fight scenes and an expansive world rich in culture. I feel like we’ve only just seen a small part of it. I find myself thinking about it even when not reading, my only small criticism is the very occasional editing error.
KilroyexpertRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story build on itself and snowballs into your mind. I could not put it down until I caught up. The author does a great job of describing scenes and really sets the stage with the intrigue. I found this after reading the author's other story, and am happy I decided to check out his other works! Thank you!
qshumwayRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It is a fun adventure. The magic is fun and the characters are enjoyable. There is some discrepancy between the Mc being and adult or a child, but overall the story kept me engaged. I look forward to following the story as it continues. The first 50 chapters seems to be an extended training montage.
Monkey D. DaddyRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This novel follwoing the trajectory of hiding power to be underdog and make life more dificult for no apparent reason reason..
mc hides all his power even that he could use magic from his families for no reason. even if just telling that he had awakened could grant him oppourtunity to learn magic in good colleges and being sponsered by other he still hides for no reason... well he hides from family but tells his friend everything.... he have multiple ability he could just tell his one abilty to the public but he chose to hide everything from even his family for no fking reason that no common sense could understant why he making his own life infinitly more difficult just to hide what could give him some advantages... It's not like he hid it from everyone-- apparantly his friend or little sister saw him using his most powerful ability sneakly... so what t fck is with hinding you fking ability... and yeah just after awakening he got into local gang fights and clche.... etc....
eeswimRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Started off strong, enjoyable first ~25 chapters. Then it slowly goes off the rails? We meet a lot of women, who are all infatuated with the MC and somehow in need of his guidance (in the most condescending way possible lol). At this point I checked to make sure it wasn’t harem tagged, and it was not (but those are the vibes for sure).
So I hoped the first few instances were a misstep in an otherwise good book, but then it started getting in the way of the plot significantly — multiple of these encounters and comments per chapter (frequently), with less and less plot progress. Ends up boring and cringey… painful to keep reading, but I keep hoping it’ll go back to the way it started?
Also lately not enough interesting or clever hurdles for the MC to overcome — relatively smooth sailing, problems overcome by just having more power than other people.
Really a shame after such a fun start! No problem if some people like this kind of thing, if the women aren’t written this grossly, but I hate the change midway through either way. Will update this if I keep reading and find some light at the end of the ick tunnel.
(Written originally at 57, next few chapters still cringe, skipped ahead to random 80s chapter to see same stuff.)
SandyManManRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Soild 25 chapters and then...... everything just shifts. It leans into corny slave tropes and introduces major changes to the story. The manner in which the main character deals with adversity is also pretty off putting. The whole slave thing really just degrades a lot of the world building to me as well.
Edit: after reading 20+ chapters after 26 I can confidently say it does not rebound to what it was. You are met with harem innuendos and almost every new character is a female. The MC's main power is hardly used after ch.26 and the core antagonists are never really addressed. This makes the MC to come across as completely spineless.
would not recommend
Nguyen Phu TrongRoyal Road
★ 1.0
When the author introduced actual dick measuring in the first chapters, you know you're in for a wild drive. The first few chapters gave the impression that the MC know what he's doing and have a well laid out plan, but apparently, he's just a doormat that get drag along. It's not unreadable, but a disappointment considering the potential.
IllirianRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Don't vacillate between having a past life "brings his adult life experience, logic, smarts, etc. adult-in-a-child's-body" MC and a helpless child stupid victim MC so many times, specifically when it is used multiple times to enable a major plot instance then have him go back to being the smart, capable MC. Examples include the MC getting robbed + bullies etc mini-arc and how you closed out Book One/transition to book two. Hopefully this helps provide some useful context/feedback to go with the rating.