The Final Disciple (An isekai Litrpg)

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Description

Everyone has a desire or something to Envy, something to keep them pushing onward throughout life to finally achieve.Having studied all the books of his clan's temple and training in many forms of combat for many isolated years, Kayd came to a saddening conclusion. In a bid to gain more knowledge than his fellow students and at least best them in that regard, he has lost the chance to gain the fame, fortune, and glory he truly desired. With his classmates having left the temple and become masters of their own or becoming heroes and monster slayers with great titles in his world, Kayd was left with nothing but Envy and Sadness.Seeing his final student in such a state, Master Carwel offered him a chance, to send him to a new world, one untouched and filled with untouched fame and glory, waiting to be taken by someone. With his agreement, Kayd was sent to the new world. But with him, new challenges awaited, and a long road towards his desires awaited him. Much more odd, others have entered the world too. Perhaps they can accomplish their goals together.Release Schedule: 2-5 per weekAverage Word count: 2000 wordsMain themes: Envy and Desire or PassionWhat to expect: Progression of mc and side characters in personality and belief as the story goes on, soft magic system (barely any rules apart from exclusive magic rules), many different settings and enemies, crafting system (consumables and items only), op mc, some moments of strategy, endless adventure, a lot of combat, lore gets deeper and deeper as time goes on.Hope you enjoy it!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Phobos105

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 141
Views: 31,353

Chapters(53 total)

What readers say about The Final Disciple (An isekai Litrpg)

“This fiction starts out with Kayd’s relationship with his master, his struggle to find purpose, but quickly goes into the introduction of his new companions in a new world. Chapters filled with beast fights, strategic combat, and hints of rivalry among othe…”
CooperWaiRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“All right so I jumped around here a little bit to get a sense for this book cuz I am way overdue on this one. This one has a clear style though. I think there's some issues later on and I think the biggest thing that I have is that it's a lot of single sent…”
WeavervaleRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(3)

CooperWaiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This fiction starts out with Kayd’s relationship with his master, his struggle to find purpose, but quickly goes into the introduction of his new companions in a new world. Chapters filled with beast fights, strategic combat, and hints of rivalry among other adventuring parties keep it entertaining. I’m looking forward to watching Kayd and his party carve out their place in this intriguing new world. If you’re interested in an adventure that combines action, ambition, and a dash of mystery, check this fiction out.
Style: It is easy to follow and get lost in the story—never a dull moment.
Grammar: There are no notable errors that distract from the story or take away from the immersion.
Story: From the first chapter, the story dives right into the heart of Kayd's journey, offering glimpses into his past ambitions and regrets. His sense of envy and desire for glory make him a relatable character, and his transition into a new world with the potential opportunity for change is interesting. The storyline rapidly unfolds, balancing well-paced action with moments of strategy and introspection. One unique element I enjoyed was the system messages appearing on scraps of paper in the characters pocket rather than a standard dialog box.
Character: Enjoyed Kayd’s evolving journey from envy to action. The side characters are each crafted with distinct personalities that make you want to learn more about them, and I’m excited to see how these relationships and potential conflicts evolve as the story progresses.
WeavervaleRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
All right so I jumped around here a little bit to get a sense for this book cuz I am way overdue on this one. This one has a clear style though. I think there's some issues later on and I think the biggest thing that I have is that it's a lot of single sentence paragraphs or a lot of. I'm not going to say they're bad but it would help if there were more beats together with it. This is a strong enough piece of pros that it would probably be publishable. I just think that the author should vary their style a little bit more and I think that that is the only good critique I can give them. And by that I mean that the grammar is fine. The grammar is a five out of five. The style could do something to make this easier and by that I mean a couple of paragraphs of longer sentences than some short choppy sentences. One is relevant and this would sing a little bit better just by the way it's presented
Story character. They're fine. I think this is a good RPG and it's got an interesting system which is good other than that I would say give it a shot.
hesrethRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Guy to his master: it's unfaiiiiiir, my friends are killing all the monsters and getting all the hype, when do I get my turn on the newspaper front page?
Master: ?
Guy: Never? Damn. That's sad....
Master: *pulls out isekai scroll*
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A story of a bunch of folks who transmigrate to fullfill their desires, with our main dude wanting glory. It's a pretty nice concept and I'm looking forward to see how it goes!
I like the language used and I love our protagonist's motivations. I love how you've crafted a world that makes murder-hoboing and achievement hunting even more necessary than your typical litrpg's.
The main party is also interesting and makes you wanna wait for more clues about their identity. I love how everyone is so goal focussed that they don't even pry into each other's identities much, it's fun.
I have a couple small gripes with the flow and style of it, it feels a tad too slow while not being expositiony enough(?) Idk I'm horrible at reviewing stuff. It's worth checking out. I'll be looking forward to what happens!
Keep it up!
Ps: how the heck do y'all get chapters out with such a frequency im just dying here T.T