The Father of All (Old Version, partially rewritten)

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Darkness existed in the beginning, perhaps even before it. Thus it is reasonable to say that it is responsible for Creation, at least partly. But countless eons after Creation, it has woken from its slumber in the face of a greatly changed Universe. What will it do?

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2018

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
333
Views
300,127

Chapters(110 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • RifleRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Keep up the good work please. I'm seeing many good fictions on hiatus and I would be really sad to see this one on hiatus not that I'm hoping it though. I really like the MC's emotionless personality. I also like the idea that darkness is the origin of everything. Most fictions have chaos as the creator. However, I think the MC should have a partner like Time or someone else. Anyway, I hope to read more of your fiction.
  • konradRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story kicks ass in particular I like the fact that side characters are just that side characters there is no pointless asspulling power ups for the MC's poor fucking friends that have no right grow with him but the plot requires it. Fuck that. The MC knows where he is going and there YOU cannot follow.
    I was seriously sick of MCs all doing the same thing and all authors that make them follow the same old same old "horny boy wakes up in a forest, levels up like only a summoned hero can, a war starts because the plot needs dem spice, the hero slays the human king he discovers to be more evil than the demon lord because demons are cool law abiding citizens and humans are meanies that's trendy and fuck you if you disagree, builds a harem of sexy demon girls with bunny ears and lives happily ever after" shit and *Bang* I find this
    1 MC basically being a fragment of the one above all thus he MC does not lose the interesting parts is not so much what the MC does but the way people react to the things the MC does
    2 MC’s objective is to observe and learn for the sake of learning itself as he ultimately wants to give that knowledge to his main self. Basically the story is full of potential it can go anywhere
    3 MC is not : an idiot, a horny teenager, a douchebag, a fool, a pussy, a weakling
    4 MC is : smart, chill, curious, calculating and hell bent on his task (learning) the MC is the dark hand behind the curtains
    A very pleasant different read I recommend it
    Thank you ASIANBOII44
  • MadKingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The author is a great story teller. He blends the charaters together very well and uses great charater building to get the personalitys of the MC and the side chars to feel real. He also answers questions in a quick manner that get to the bottom of what the story is trying to convey to the readers. Very well done. I hope to have this story continue. Your Friend The MADKING
  • Ruler Of PrideRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Underrated.Honestly.Keep uo the good work,Ill suppoer quietly in the shadows like the Darkness. ;D
  • NeoMareRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It is a very well written story and the author puts some serious effort. However, it is not my cup of tea.
  • ThereaderonetwothreeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a nice concept, Keep it up. Hope to read more.
  • OdysseusRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    i really like it, and it's well written, flows well and has very few grammar mistakes, right up until chapter 12 when the story stops making any kind of sense whatsoever