The Exiled Prince

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Blacky

• Exiled Prince Reboot
  Nov 22, 2021
• Announcement
  Jun 8, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• wolfshadowRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So I love how this story diverts from the mainstream themes and has some surprising plot twists. The complex story line shows that the author knows his stuff. The plot so far has always surprised me, just when I think someone will die, they don't. In a way he is really OP in another way he is at a disadvantage and the author uses this combination to keep the story very interesting. Had my full attention from the beginning. The grammar has been a little iffy. The author really knows how to play with my heartstrings.
• MarshalBlack26Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Oh the drama!!!. This story is filled with instances where the MC always gets cornered and I can’t help but feel the pain … Oh well, all I can say is that  this is one heck of a masterpiece. So please AS MUCH AS YOU CAN, KEEP THIS STORY GOING …. THIS STORY DESERVES MORE than just being in the “Popular this Week” category! … Bravo Bravo!!.  JOLLY WELL DONE AUTHOR!!, JOLLY WELL DONE!!
• PranayRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I think that the idea is very innovative and the story is interesting to read . The author just needs to increase the pace of the story and stop explaining every minute thing in detail . All in all , this story is very interesting.
  Good luck and keep up the good work !!!
  And yeah , keep the chapters rolling !!!!!!!
  PS : Just please don’t drop this story .
• ScorpionRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Ok so far it’s the prelude to what I think will be a GREAT story due to the authors writing style and pace. Gonna be a fun time with science VS. Magic!
  Ok so another few chapters in and it looks like we get a technological OPness in this story butttttttt who knows how much. Sounds like he’s gotten through most of his education to the highschool level buuuttt he does have a crazy inventor dad sooo gonna be fun on the bun
  Note
  I wanna tell yal why I love these science VS magic stories is because they’re both different sides of the same coin and seeing both elements in one place is extremely fascinating! In reality magic doesn’t exist( Not that science knows of yet…who knows the universe is HUGE, may be some unknown isotope or element that some sentiant species learned to manipulate using their minds or bodies) but in fantasy books the laws of physics change resulting in societies advanced in using the abilities to manipulate the world around them. Then on the science side of the coin, when something as convenient as magic doesn’t exist humans learn to manipulate the world around them using machines, tools and techniques on pace with magic. That’s why this mashup of elements in a story is so very interesting! It’s our reality VS another in a direct matchup to be the most powerful, efficient or badass!
• jwrightRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Theres so much that is great about this story. Main character is super interesting. You can get your crafting fix. Plenty of fun action. Perfect dose of romance to keep it interesting. Finally you have some great family drama. The villainy is well done as well.
  Author, your grammar is impeccable and I appreciate your work.
  Ps. Moar chappies plz
• me.is.higgsbosonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Brother blacky!
  It's been two years since the last announcement ... If you're seeing this , I hope you could reply  as to when the continuation of TEP is gonna get uploaded 🥺...
  Been visiting this website atleast once a week or month since the announcement....
  Idk , sometimes I feel like I could write my own continuation to the story but I would miss your original intention this way...
  Greetings and do your best to upload this novel till completion...
  With love and hope
  - fan of fucking shit (FS)
• BlinkOfAnEyeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Style- Is very consistent. Provides multiple POVs. Has emotion of different character's thoughts and feelings.
  Story- Interesting concept. Not an reincarnation story or a story of an OP MC with magic. The MC  is rather a magicless person but with the ability of science which the world has never even heard of.
  Grammar is a bit effy here and there but over all it is readable.
  Character- Character development is sort of skipped so we have to sort of assume that any new character traits he has achieved is due to the "time skip". Though there is a few iffy moments on his character like how quickly he beings to open up the elf girl (even though she meant well) when he was betrayed and she was practically the first living thing he saw that was not an NPC.
• SpDukeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Don't know why its not rated higher. I enjoyed my binge, wish there was more!
• pldlRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  It's surprising because I thought the story would be another poorly done science vs fantasy attempt. However, it's actually fairly interesting. Most of the characters are dumb, yet there is enough engagement that I strangely don't have too much of an issue with it. I suspect that a lot of the issues comes from the occasional poor grammar/spelling highlighting smaller problems and making them bigger than they really are. (When you trip over a section with poor grammar or spelling, you tend to stay and reread that section and notice things you usually would just pass over.)
  It's weird, because while I read, I felt like I was reading a story with all the characteristics of a slightly below average novel, but after finishing each chapter it felt like I had just read a pretty well-done chapter. A little rough at times, but interesting. Very interesting.
• lxg1k1Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  This isn't really a review more of a soft critic directly to the author on some aspects i think you can improve on.
  First off let start be saying i like this story and this critic is in no way a rant(as you can see from the scores i gave). With that said it has, in my opinion, a few flaws.
  SPOILER ALERT:
  His "hatred" towards anything mana related and trying to prove science is better. Of course i realize and understand why he hates mana, but his behavior is a bit to "racist" without the races(couldn't find a better word  to explain it ). Basically he wants t prove science is better then mana and shuns everything related to it(at least his behavior till now ch.57). Ironically that is not how science works. Science is to literally use everything at your disposal to experiment in search of new developments in a VERY SIMPLIFIED nutshell.
  So the MC isn't anything scientist like. Now it's not that bad yet, but i hope you can slowly make him accept mana(not use per say, i mean mentally accept it) and experiment with mana materials for wahtever come to your head( mana stone flamethrower, enhance his serum with mana, etc . your imagination is the limit) and try to figure out why he can't use even if he can't cure it. Not only will this behavior make him use science more but let's face it,
  HE is being a huge crybaby about that.
  Character. - well this is the worst one perhaps ? I mean it has been either enemy or friend. Not one elf is reasonable, NOT ONE. It's like they are bipolars, one moment they are calm the other sh*t hits the fan HARD.And pls do not get rid of of Silphi. Ironically she had the best development explained so far, sure she was a bitch at the start but you explained why, well. So don't get rid of over her just because she doesn't follow the mc around like an obedient dog because sure as hell the mc hasn't done SHT to deserve it , FROM ANYBODY. I mean he doesn't explain anything to anyone and resorts do deceit anytime anyone doubts himeven  if just for a seco