The Engram of Elisha: Book 1

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Lily Bergstrom is a powerful magical swordsman with a dream of becoming a platinum ranked magician. At Brookewood Academy, to become a platinum ranked magician, you must defeat one in battle. However, to even have the right to challenge a platinum ranked magician, the challenger must first clear a Labyrinth, a mysterious realm with many powerful enemies. On-top of all of this, Lily has a beautiful girlfriend which she hates being away from. Follow Lily on her quest to become a powerful magician and find true love.

You can purchase the book on Amazon at https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B0DST9YMC3

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Status: Completed
Year: 2024
Author: JJBenefield

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 107
Views: 9,901

Chapters(19 total)

What readers say about The Engram of Elisha: Book 1

“The story and writing style is great! I absolutely love the characters, and Lilly and Meimei's relationship looks so cute (like, I swear I need to see those two IRL)! Although, there are just a couple of grammatical errors that throw me off, such as putting…”
AmbitiousPotatoRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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AmbitiousPotatoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story and writing style is great! I absolutely love the characters, and Lilly and Meimei's relationship looks so cute (like, I swear I need to see those two IRL)!
Although, there are just a couple of grammatical errors that throw me off, such as putting full stops after someone's speech when the sentence is still continuing with phrases that describe how the person has spoken e.g. '"...you cannot come in here." The pixie retorted...'
Proper grammar for that would be: "...you cannot come in here," the pixie retorted...
And also, a few more commas in certain sentences that incorporate conjunctions, such as 'but' and 'as' could be used.
Besides small errors like that, I absolutely love this! It is my favourite series on Royal Road! Great job, author! I would love to read more from you!