The Encroaching Rift [Dropped]

Self-Published

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Description

This is a story about a young teenager named Colm that had his whole life flipped upside down. On one random day, rifts began appearing across earth. Monsters that were once thought just to be myths began appearing, slaughtering anything in their sights. However all hope was not lost. With the opening of the rifts came a power that would enable humanity to survive. A power that was similar to a game.I took some elements from rpgs and incorporated them into the story.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Marythou

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 424
Views: 187,052

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Community Reviews(4)

HexwolfxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Can't to see what happens next the fight sceans really good and chacther development is really good has well
RabenFutterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The World seems Intresting however as of chapter 20 we dont see much of it butt it seems that it has an intresting twist.
The only problem i have is that is so slow, the novel focus is too much on magic and how it works i also find myself offten jumping a paragraph because of it.
The mc seems to want to become stong in order to protect his mother and father so far that motive seems weak but it is too soon to make a jugement off his character.
pattou59Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
your storie have huge potential and I will follow , but a advice change you resume, he did not want to follow you storie . continue with you storie and good luck ^^ !
LaughingStock001Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Its good, though I only give it 4 stars beacuse your chap. Are short. Hahah