The Empires Rise

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Description

Come to Corenthia, a world where building your own empire isn’t just a goal but a requirement for survival. Where making the best products can cause your cities to grow at unprecedented rates, and where the strongest fist isn’t the only way to the top of the world. While there are no timers till the end of an empire the ever hungry fog will encroach on those that aren’t willing to take a step forward.

Follow along with Drake as he finds his way in this brand new world while learning that being a leader isn’t what it is cracked up to be, where adventure is literally just around the corner, and where the prizes he can win help not just him but those around is as well, but he is always aware that if he fails he will find himself on his own deathbed. Will he build an empire that can span to the stars or will he find himself stuck and unable to progress, slowly having his domain eaten from underneath him.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: RenTapestry

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 190
Views: 149,820

Chapters(173 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

AzureWhaleRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I've not seen many stories of this type of isekai in the past, but I can say that this is the most interesting of them. The magic system, the bloodlines, and world-building in general are definitely above average, especially for a first novel.
There are some odd punctuation errors, ie. periods where there should be commas and the opposite. Grammar is good. The story could flow more smoothly, but, again, this is a first novel and I'm sure that this will improve as the author gets more experience.
Overall this is an unusually creative and well planned story. I'm looking forward to more.
jedi1123Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This book has its ups and downs mostly with the way info is presented, but I think it is a really good book the grammar could be better and the way scenes are written can be improved but that doesn't take from the story it just needs a really good polish and probably more readers to help.
FMFalloutRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Story progression is nice. Narrative is simple. Information is situation based and isn't presented all at once. The MC is egalitarian and all decisions are made as a community. Not sure how that's going to hold up later in the stroy when you're trying to build a kingdom. Historically it's never been done so it is going to be interesting to see how people who want to rule over others are introduced or if people who do not want to concede control to the group appear. I'm old, lesbian trolls and they/them pronoun nonsense gets me. I'm out. Good luck with the rest of your story.
Sergeant SorenRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
TL;DR: The premise of a good RR story, the writing of a badly-translated quidian novel.
The premise is good, there's an actual thumbnail and all...but. The author's writing is brain-wrangling. It's either 70% useless information or a bunch of mediocre information that we could've gotten in chapter 2,3,4,5 etc when it became needed. There's so much clutter, such bad grammar and horrible style.
Author, please fix your grammar. Even grammarly free could help. Or post your chapters in a forum site that helps with grammar, there's bound to be a dozen. Your writing is bordeline unreadable.