The elf from Shaylet

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The elves are a race that pride themselves in the purity of their blood, in their natural beauty and in their mastery of archery. They love nature and hate those that defile it.

Finch is nothing like them. He could care less about nature. The most elven thing about him is his ears and boyish face. He grew up enslaved by racist nobles and escaped the first chance he got. Taking odd jobs to make enough to get by, he honed his skill in the sword and became an adventurer. This is about how his first big assignment from the guild might change the kingdom

*This is the first fiction I have ever written, please be gentle.*

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: DarKKlouD

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 38
Views: 68,855

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★★★★★ 4.5
The novel is good, the magic system is simple and easy to understand, and the world seems large and interesting.
The novel contains mystery and sometimes frightening.
But I hoped it would be more frightening. I haven't finished the novel yet, so I don't know, maybe the horror will increase in the future
But I cannot relate to the main character.
Sometimes he is a greedy man who rescued the noble girl to get money from her parents,
but the main character is skilled at stealing and he can get a large amount of money if he wants.
But he seemed to change now.
He is a hero who endures the cruelty of his companion Vylet because she is tense and wants to save the demon girl.
The change in character was fast and I did not like it .
I think that the writer should reduce the level of danger in the story because the main character is very strong and I do not know why he is afraid of The guild master
The villagers worship demons so I thought they were evil,but the writer later said that demons are good. So I do not know .
the humans are the real demons in this world and the excuse that the writer invented is that humans are greedy, so they are demons.
The writer made a very big declaration that demons are peaceful and humans are evil, and he refused to explain more.
The first chapters were frightening and interesting, but now they are useless