The Edge of Vision

Self-Published

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Description

The entire journey of cultivation can be distilled into three words "Sunder your limits". Obi has lived a life defined by his limitations until a near death experience sets his feet on the journey to immortality.

This is his story.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: ArtfulDodger

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 19
Views: 8,331

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Community Reviews(3)

BellendRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a very well written story, love the world building so far. The Author does descriptions very well as its gets the point across without being over the top.
I just found this today and will definitely keep coming back to this story for sure, it looks like he also frequently updates his story.
I will update this review accordingly if the quality of work drops off haha
JustyouraverageleecherRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like the progression of the story it is Very different from the usual stories of this genre.
The beginning is highly unusual but intriguing
Grammar errors are rare but you can Spot them sometimes and some sentences are a bit awkward.
It can be seen that the author is Very passionate about this work and I wish him good luck on this book.
MafiosoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Wasn't sure about this one but i'm definitely glad i started it, love how the author has set the stage up nicely for character development.
Only positives for me at this point, if i wanted to nitpick the only thing i'd say is that this so far is onlly 3 chapters in but 3 chapters in 5 days is a pretty good pace, so keep it up.
Thanks for the chapters