THE DEMONIC CELESTIAL

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Description

James a biochemist in his past life just got murderd by his best friend he is then transmigrated into th body of a youth without celestial veins watch at how he rules as the celestial sovereign

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Okika252

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTSREINCARNATION

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Rating
3.3/ 5.0
Followers
36
Views
22,556

Chapters(30 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • DarkAetherRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Currently I am in the middle of chapter two out of ten and figured I should get a review down for people to get an idea and to provide some advice to Okika252. The premis behind Demonic Celestial seems like an interesting idea and using the death by friend trope isn't a bad way to start off the series and besides maybe one or two mistakes the spelling is pretty good, but the issue is the structure for the story. Using the Prologue chapter for an example a perfect case is our first paragraph that we start reading is actually all one sentence that doesn't actually end until James calls his friend. There may or may not be other things to add for things that could use a bit of a touch up but im not a grammer natzi and I don't pretend to be one, just figured I would point it out to help the story along. Thanks for providing us with this chance to read it Okika252