The Cardboard Explorer

Self-Published

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Description

In an age of magic, space travel and explorations, humans had far surpassed what they were capable of in the past.

In a small planet located in a small star sector, a young man name Cade was living his life peacefully.

One day, Cade was playing around with cardboard and he suddenly awakened his system. However, an accident happened and the cardboard he played with became part of his power.

Followed Cade's journey in making his name as an explorer in the universe.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
67
Views
34,341

Chapters(39 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • neoprime2873Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I was enjoying this story so much I had to go another site to follow the rest of the story.
  • BruhtonnRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    the premise of the story is cool, if it is rewritten, it can really look good. I advise you to take the thing out of the cardboard, come on, man, in a futuristic world, a nut if 20 years making cardboard weapons? are there no plastic or wooden weapows, toys, etc.? it would be even better if he had an ornamental sword, you know, those metal replicas but, which are just to look real. furthermore, keep notes on the plot, because some things have changed from one chapter to another, the cardboard sword would have been destroyed by the liquid from the slinnes, but it appeared new and clean in the next chap. but the worst part was the slimes "revolt" chapter, it was bizarre, sorry.
    - "Cade saw that the situation suddenly turned weird. The army of slime stopped attacking him and he saw that the slime’s boss’s face was filled with fear." SERIOUSLY?? Does the boss slime have a face ??weren't slimes just jelly balls with a core? if the boss is different, at least give some suggestion.
  • Omnis RaRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The story has to much going. When a sentence starts telling about what Cade is doing it repeats itself. The story is a new take on the Hero Awakening for me. I am going to read more so I can see what happens. But I do hope you can expand the story arc.
  • lucydRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    While the story and premise are good, there are quite a few grammatical errors that bother me and most of those could be solved by re-reading the chapter or using Grammarly, which I strongly suggest the author uses. This is an interesting story though so I'm going to continue reading in hopes that it gets better in later chapters.